Reviews for The fall of a king
Guest chapter 2 . 12/6/2018
Why is it Nick who has to be the punching bag? Why?
Guest chapter 7 . 11/21/2018
que pobre nooo eso es doloroso nooo
Guest chapter 7 . 4/9/2018
espero que judi ayude a recuperarse a nick totalmente y que hagan pedasitos al que le hiso essto el autor jeem digo el billano
Guest chapter 7 . 9/10/2017
Why dont you just upload the chapter withoutd edits to show that you didn't just abandon this story. Btw its been about a little more than a year now and im craving more. Pls update with a note at least to show didnt abandon.
Guest chapter 7 . 12/11/2016
Please update soon. No pressure though : )
Gamer4COD chapter 7 . 8/11/2016
A113... Are you an animator? Heh, well if not it still got a chuckle out of me (considering that this is a grim dark story, good job). Keep writing this, it has definitely caught my eye.
Sergeant Redpath chapter 7 . 8/10/2016
I screamed when I got the update notification! great chapter
GUNSLINGER99 chapter 7 . 8/10/2016
I was ready to forgive you for the delay, but then you mentioned savagehopps.
Time to ready the mob
LupinTheWolf chapter 6 . 8/9/2016
Please update soon! She finally has Nick back, now he needs to remember!
Martybraze chapter 1 . 7/20/2016
This is an interesting story I can't wait for its next update.
Gamer4COD chapter 6 . 7/19/2016
Minor spelling errors throughout, but a compelling story all the same. If or when you get done with this, please go back and fix all of them. Other than that, great job so far, now for the hard part; waiting for another chapter.
personthatissad chapter 6 . 7/17/2016
Hey man, this series is awesome maybe you can update it please?
thanks - Personthatissad
Dark Shining Light chapter 6 . 7/15/2016
A few grammar mistakes but other than that, the story is great! Love the concept and can't wait for more
syhsnakey chapter 6 . 7/8/2016
Oh man, Nick got rescued. Can't wait to see how this goes.
RANGER140 chapter 6 . 7/7/2016
I like it and I am looking forward to the next chapter
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