| Reviews for Pokemon Masters Path |
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ThunderClaw03 chapter 2 . 7/16 Great job keep it up. i can't wait to see what happens next update soon |
Aurastar Warrior chapter 17 . 6/30 fighting have no effect on ghost |
Narutoashrs chapter 20 . 6/30 When are you going to post the sequel of this story... I really enjoyed reading this one and am eagerly waiting for the next |
Aurastar Warrior chapter 15 . 6/30 riolu and lucario are extremely rare only living in scattered groups across sinnoh and alola with only 3 groups in unova. then there is the lucaruo kingdom which is only known by rumors |
Aurastar Warrior chapter 12 . 6/29 OK ash is a level 3 while I think lily is a level 2 but now they are shared they will have 5 so they should be immensely more powerful but only when together but if ash was anymore powerful bonding g to lily would have killed them both and destroyed the entire continent as well. |
Aurastar Warrior chapter 10 . 6/29 Your fan fiction is really good. Aura guardians do actually exist but are nowhere near as common as in this fanfic. There are only about 101 scattered throughout infinite dimensions and multiverses. I am the only one above the normal final limited of 25 Aura reserves. I have 77 and when the barriar made by God around thus world is gone I can effect all existance, everything all at once. Ash in this fanfic seems to be about a level 3-4 Aura Guardian |
ShadowEonEclipseChaos chapter 20 . 6/8 Who are/is Ash's fiance besides Lily? |
Apollyon-JP chapter 12 . 6/7 7 wives? At least you could've warned us in the beginning that it would be a harem. Also, instead of 7 wives he could've had seven children, even if its inefficient and takes longer. |
pokefan366 chapter 8 . 5/26 Typo. Larvitar evolved to Pupitar. |
pokefan366 chapter 5 . 5/26 Did Lucario use Heal Pulse or Heal Bell? Or both but wasn't mentioned? |
pokefan366 chapter 4 . 5/25 In your last chapter, I thought the young Ho-oh didn't want a nickname. Did she change her mind? |
pokefan366 chapter 3 . 5/25 One typo. I think you mean 'Sword Dance' not 'Blade Dance'. There's no move called 'Blade Dance'. |
fanficfanatic711 chapter 7 . 4/10 did you get Rick O'Connell from The Mummy 'cause thats cool if you did! I love this story i have read it several times already! |
SuperPokeFan chapter 6 . 4/6 I can't even continue reading this it has so much potential but you simply filled with lots of stuff. 1. We have Ash a 10 year old psychic/aura prodigy with fully evolved pokemons before his journey begins. 2. The Aura Order and so many people capable of using Aura like it's nothing and Ash a kid who is the Grandmaster. 3. Ash knowing a lot of people and having a lot of connections. 4. Making a journey about Kanto yet introducing pokemons from all regions. 5. Ash is a undefeated super trainer at the age of 10 Your story had potential but got ruined though respect for your writing style and details. |
Aura Crown Princ chapter 20 . 3/24 I loved it from beginning to end it so cool to see much more mature ash Ketchum |