Why this story mark complete when it's not?

woah this chapter was edge of the intense. cant wait to see the next one!

it was great to read a new chapter thanks for your work

Well, this was cool, wonder what happens next

So far so good for the most part, but I’ve noticed in several instances thus far that you use the name Harry instead of Naruto. I see that you have several Harry Potter stories as well and imagine that’s the cause of it. But it’s something you might want to go through and fix for the sake of keeping the sentences flowing.

Please change the name of the kid from Hantei to something else. Every time i see it i see Hentai and it really pulls you out the story.

Odd question. Why hasn’t Obito had someone revive Rin? I’m sure it’d take much less chakra to edo summon her then have Nagato bring her the rest of the way back. That has always bothered me. He’s been shown to have been able to subjugate the white zetsu attached to him. Madara has to be alive to activate the seal on his heart. Summon Rin, get her revived, beg for forgiveness and blame most of the actions on the seal on your heart and being blinded by grief.

Well this chapter had teh Uchiha's kicking ass huh not bad glad to see Mikoto kicking ass.

Heya bro, I've read 5 of your chapter and finally get something that not click with my taste. But it's just some advice.
1. Choose between spelling jutsus with english or japanese, i would choose english because japanese is difficult.
2. Your idea of story are remarkable, but lack of story line. I think your story was way too fast. Build it slowly.
3. "Lalalalal speak and bold jutsus" please separate them like
"lalala speak"
"Bold Italic Jutsus" i would appreciate if you do just that. Because to be honest, it's sucks. Sorry if i'm being bold.
4. I would appreciate if you revise from the beginning.
Lastly i hope you'll understand. Cause English are not main language, it's like third for me.

Well, that was rather interesting another InoShikaCho team huh nice.

thanks for the new chapter it was a good fight chapter thank you

Well, that was quite an interesting battle wonder what happens next.

Nice chapter.

this story has been a great read i like how you changed the age of naruto and the pairing for him you are doing a great job hope to read more soon thanks

That was a fast chapter, you sure went over the one month training quickly, as well as the matches. Oh well, most likely because nothing changed much. It was a nice setup for the action that is about to start in the next chapter (I hope). Thanks for the update, have a happy new year!