| Reviews for Strength, Power and Victory |
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   Tenjo chapter 1 . 8/24 Awkward dialogue, terrible flow, strange choice of words.. not to mention you don’t use paragraphs where you should and you gave up on the main appeal of the story; he’s hardly a secret teacher if the hokage knows about him. |
| Cranky Monkey 699 chapter 28 . 5/6 This is pretty good. I hope you continue it . Even if you have to rewrite I hope it at least follows the same lines |
| Enforcer209 chapter 28 . 4/19 Well this is certainly an interesting story to read and it’s quite enjoyable |
| Lopendria chapter 28 . 3/12 Im sorry to hear that you need to put this in hiatus. I have greatly enjoyed the story so far. Good luck! I believe in you. |
| 777torn777 chapter 28 . 3/10 I can see from reading this from start to this chapter. Tenten seems kinda thrown into the forefront on the story. |
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 27 . 3/10 Well, that was interesting |
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 26 . 3/10 Well, that was interesting and so Danzo's dead huh nice. |
| DragonshadowRyukage chapter 28 . 3/9 If you choose to rewrite it, please leave it up for the annals of history and to look back on it and see the difference between the two. If you remember what you were doing with it, thank you. Both for putting in the time and effort to write it, but also to remember and continue the story. |
| BlackDragonShinigami chapter 27 . 2/15 forst paragraph. you called temari "tenten" |
| Raphaim chapter 1 . 2/15 senpai* |
| Jostanos chapter 27 . 2/15 *ahem* "Tenten" called the meeting to order? I know that you cleared that up in the next paragraph, but.. why didn't you fix that error? Other than that minor gripe you post another excellent chapter, Thank you. :) |
| StrongGuy159 chapter 27 . 2/15 Cool chapter continue please. |
| SPark681 chapter 27 . 2/15 Hmm, so the shitstorm has calmed down some and things are slowly returning to normal until the next shitstorm anyways keep up the great work! |
| Jostanos chapter 26 . 2/14 Naruto, you are in a far better place with people/ninjas that know, trust, and care for you. You saved Gaara from "himself" and became his first real friend. Not only that, but he also has a better relationship with his siblings and Suna as a whole because of it. You know.. if you kept Uzumaki as a middle name and tacked on Namikaze as your true last name tah your initials would spell: "NUN"? |
| Born2BeGodLike chapter 26 . 1/14 26 chapters and soon this fic going to be 4 year old and I'm still waiting for Naruto/Temari to hook up already. Fic good but totally disappointed that after this long there not together yet. |
