Reviews for The Scarlet Spring
cumberling chapter 1 . 3/14/2017
The prologue is so well-written. I love how you put Sarada's thoughts into words. You couldn't have written it any better. It's interesting to read her inner struggles as the daughter of the former sole survivor of the Uchiha. This is exactly how I imagined it would be.
The Dark Princess Laia chapter 6 . 2/28/2017
In love with this story, it's great! Also very interesting to see how you focus Sarada's and Sasuke's relationship, it's simply an awesome job! Keep going
Guest chapter 6 . 2/27/2017
awesome fic..
fanofthisfiction chapter 1 . 1/31/2017
The Prologue can stand alone as a nice one shot of Sarada's thoughts. How wonderful it's an introduction to a story though. Sasuke is all powerful with a murky past and to be the daughter of such an infamous man, one can only wonder what goes through young Sarada's mind as she untangles the mystery that is Sasuke Uchiha. Thanks for sharing!
electricangel12 chapter 6 . 1/14/2017
Glad to see this chapter update. I like how you wrote in what might've happened for Sarada to have to wear glasses. Like you're filling in the gap that Kishimoto never bothered with. It's nice. Looking forward to the next one.
sexy sonic queen chapter 4 . 1/14/2017
I love your story I'm hooked
pogi.genesis79 chapter 5 . 6/23/2016
when is the next update of this story?
Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2016
Really good story so far, enjoying the concept of it keep it up X
electricangel12 chapter 5 . 6/1/2016
Man. I was kinda hoping that Sarada's glasses just lay there from having been knocked off when she and that guy disappeared, then Sasuke would pick it up then clip it where his old headband used to be :P I have a hunch that Boruto would find her first. Good writing!
Freya's Valhalla chapter 5 . 5/31/2016
I like these little snippets, and I specially enjoyed seeing how the three adults experienced Sarada's kidnapping, how Boruto is the strong one that tries to keep it together. My constructive criticism would be that they maybe dwelt too long on the situation, I think at least Naruto and Sasuke would've reacted quicker to desperation.
DeepPoeticGirl chapter 5 . 5/30/2016
(Too lazy to log in lol.) This was a great chapter! Very emotion packed! The line "It's breaking him more easily than it used to." obliterated me ;A; you pictured their desperation very nicely! Good job :)
Sabrina chapter 5 . 5/30/2016
Such an emotional chapter ;;
I could really feel the bond between our favourite family and Sasuke's reaction was so on point!
AriCat-Hg chapter 5 . 5/30/2016
Oh my, Sasuke and Sakura, I felt bad for them ... But in sure sarada could save herself ( well if just she runs away and that ) for sure they will save their kid ! And with the help of naruto and boruto even misuki!
I love sarada ... She Is like the perfect combination of Sasuke and Sakura ️
kisekiss chapter 4 . 5/28/2016
Holy cow this is exciting! What a cliffhanger tho haha hope you update soon
defunct192938391019 chapter 4 . 5/27/2016
Oops! In my review down there I put in little hearts in the last sentence after 'always', hope you can see them. It doesn't show up for me. Hahaha! Sorry!
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