Where did the next hide ? XD Love it, I want to read more...

Oh no! What're they gonna do now? This is great! Please continue this story!

you need to make more chapters, i found myself pulled in at the second paragraph.

you need to keep going with this

So I know I'm a little late to the party on this story, but I gotta say, I love what I've seen so far. You haven't updated in over a year, though, and that's a little sad... I hope you can re-find the time/inspiration you need to pick this story up again! And if you can't, that's cool too, but it seems like a really good start to an even better story!

Keep writing please! I really like what you have so far.

I like where this is goingyou should write more