I love how long the chapters are, it makes the waiting all the more bearable for the next chapter to come out. The dynamics in the story are great! The character connections are inventive too. I thank you for not putting any smut with the romance stuff, I deeply appreciate it. I got a question, are Juvia and Gray going to come in on the action too? I thought that they would be more involved with the deadman investigation because of their character backgrounds and ties with the main characters.

This chapter was absolutely amazing like all the others. I can always imagine and see what is happening, playing out like a movie. The ending broke my heart. It sent out so much emotion, that I am so excited for the next chapter. Every chapter always leaves me thinking about it for days. I love this story, and I keep coming back, never disappointed. Thank you and I hope everything is going well for you! Keep writing and making this story so lively and making me feel happy, then on edge, then cautious, then warm and then pop. I can't describe it, and that's the best thing. Take your time and keep writing!

this is seriously amazing. i love the concept and storyline and now i really really am feeling the story’s mood. honestly i’m scared for Lucy, stressed out for Natsu, and Levy damn she’s amazing. The suspense and everything UGH! can’t wait for everything to just unveil itself i’m dying You’re awesome! T-T

Finally caught up to the latest chapter and I can't believe things became this intense since the last time i read this story!i remember feeling annoyed with Loke but now my sympathy for him seriously off the charts. Mistress seems quite demented and also i might have an inkling on who she might be.
You sure know how to write tension well though. I could feel the one between Natsu and Lucy and I'm not even there!XD
on another note i love how Natsu got so nervous before meeting up with Lucy. so cute.
and damn what exactly transpired between Loke and Lucy for her to get so scared?im intrigued.
absolutely loving where this is going and can't wait for more!

Oh well damn! Now I'm screaming for you to put the next chapter up soon. Okay really not pressuring you but I love the tension between Natsu and Lucy.

FINALLY !

Love the excitement and cheer with this chapter! I absolutely love how kick-ass Lucy was here when she knew something was up with Aries and she did the opposite of what Loke wanted. Whooo you go, smart girl! The family part was also really touching and how Natsu blessed that man with a $100 bill. It’s great to see kindness like that. I cannot wait to see what happens next! I want to see that villain girl go down and for Natsu, Lucy and Levy to outsmart them!

Come back

Wow this villainess is so terrifying! I feel so bad for poor Loke. I hope they can rescue him. He doesn’t deserve that treatment. He needs help. The moment between Natsu and Lucy was so sweet. I could feel the longing between them. Love the plot too! Great fic! Please keep writing!

I loved it! Thank goodness she realized... thank you! I need to know where the story is going next!

I just finished reading apyjck and oh my gosh. If this were an actual novel, I would have instantly bought this book without hesitation. Everything within the story is wonderfully crafted and it truly is a masterpiece. I hope you as a person are doing well and I truly hope you continue to keep writing the story until finished. It’s unbelievable that you have over 204k words. That is so bizarre and so incredible at the same time. I just wanted to let you know that your story is amazing. You captured everything so well and I can envision the story absolutely perfectly. You have a remarkable talent for writing and I hope you continue to use it and pursue it. Thank you so much for writing and sticking with this amazing story, it has given me so much entertainment and easily is my favorite story. I look very much forward to chapter 32! :)

It's incredible how you can keep on track with the story after all these years. I'm sure you must have outlines and such, but even so, being able to stay with the story and the characters' personalities is impressive. You write with such imagery and sureness, it's a piece of art. I enjoyed reading this chapter, taking me through a series of emotions, and really thinking about the entire situation. Keep up the great work, looking forward to the next chapter!

THERE'S RED FLAGS EVERYWHERE IM SO NERVOUS FOR WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

why is this story so good TT
PLEASE PLEEEEASE UPDATE SOON

Another fabulous chapter! Can't wait to read what's next