Oh heck ya! I can't wait for the next part now:-)

Sweet yes! Time for Jack to get his Keyblade!

Wow, that played even more insanely than the movie fight!-LOL. Nicely done there.

You're right, quite shocked to see Skuld enter the fray. Well played my friend, that was great!

Jeez, that got all kinds of complicated, and I'm curious to what Jack's Keyblade will be.

The scene where Elizabeth freaks out while they fight always makes me snicker, but this was even funnier :)

No sweat, delaying stories is completely normal.
I liked that line where Jack said "where do you think pirates come from, palm trees?" I lol'd. I can't wait when both groups meet and recognize Myde and Dulor and when Myde sees Lea and Roxas' doubles (I bet that will be funny) I liked that Lea was reassuring Elizabeth and told her about his past from (and I quote Obi-Wan) a certain point of view.

Oh Jack, you sly devil, being able to see the love between Sora and Kairi. Looks like Vanitas is being somewhat of a Ghost of Christmas Future-esq guide to Sora. Interesting to see Hades to be scared for once, and that comment about Maleficent was he- hilarious. And who does this bear man think he is? Our heroes are capable of saving the Universe, he needs to be whacked up side the head.

Keep up the good work.

This is brilliant. I hope it continues.

Great chapter, I really like this story since it has some interesting theories. It's nice to see Demyx and Luxord alive and well again (or, should I say... Myde and Dulor?) -cue dramatic gasps and music). If the first eight members of Org. XIII came back as their original selves, wouldn't the same thing apply to 9-12. That is a question that has been in my head since Dream Drop Distance.

That's cool that you included Professor Von Drake. Please continue.

This is going to be good. I hope you continue this story.