| Reviews for The Good Husband |
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guategal chapter 10 . 3/20 Your detailed focus on that physical attraction pull between A & W plays such an important role in this story's plot as well as in the tv rendition. In higher connection states that feeling of almost reading the other's mind is indeed a special deserving nod. I certainly am most interested in this role reversal plot development and how you'll take this into the characters' developments treatment. What a unique ride you're having! Thanks so for an enjoying respite with W & A again. |
Latenightmom chapter 10 . 3/18 Another fun update! Adding Peter to the mix could be interesting. Even though he and Alicia divorced he may still find issue with she and Will bring together. Hmmm, I’m excited to see where you go with that plot. |
Latenightmom chapter 9 . 3/15 Yay! I was sooooo excited to see an update for one of your stories! This was a great chapter! I love how you capture each of their thoughts. The sexual tension is as thick as mud. Colin Sweeney’s comment was spot on! I so hope you’re going to keep writing this! I’m definitely hoping for more. |
SongForRegina chapter 8 . 12/8/2019 I really like this fanfic! I hope you go on! Please I need to know what happens... I need to see his reaction to Alicia's outfit! |
The-KLF chapter 8 . 1/25/2018 I just found this story, and I really hope you continue it. I think it's such a great AU idea! And these two together are the best thing ever for my shipper heart! |
Latenightmom chapter 8 . 9/24/2017 I was so excited to se this update! I'm so glad you're going to continue this. I'm sooty to hear things have been so crazy for you. I'm really iterated to see where you go with this. I loved the description of Ali is getting ready, and the constant thoughts of Will that kept crossing her mind. Should be fun to see how court goes since both Alicia and Will have the other on their mind. Have to say your depiction of Sweeney and what he'd think if he knew what A/W we're thinking was spot in. And I liked Wills text message. I'm glad to hear your back! Can't wait for more! |
Rori Potter chapter 7 . 4/3/2017 Interesting. Update soon. |
Guest chapter 7 . 1/11/2017 LOVE IT! Hope to see more Alicia and WIll SOOON?! |
guategal chapter 7 . 1/11/2017 Was so happy to see your name and this story listed here with TGW updates! Welcome back indeed! Your Will character here is centering on his fatherhood role. Am enjoying Will now in the exact role reversal position as Alicia's in TGW. Your plotting renews and refreshes that A/W relationship bonding with its role differences heightening interests. Your keep of their mutual respect and magnetism pull has your plot firing away with high jumping flames as ever. This reader is looking forward again now to your quality writing was as you increase that special temperature between A & W. |
Latenightmom chapter 7 . 1/10/2017 I was so excited to see you posted! I love reading about Will being a father. He's in a really sticky place right now. I felt like his words to as honest as he could have said them for the moment. But it will be interesting to see how the cards fall as this goes on. I'm looking forward to reading about his meeting in court, and further interactions with Alicia. |
Amynsieve chapter 7 . 1/10/2017 I love that Will is so concerned about and devoted to his kids, that he appreciates them, enjoys them. Will as a father has always appealed to me. The idea that Alicia and Will would rekindle a close friendship also seems like fun to watch, and a good idea for the development of their relationship. I'm not getting the feeling that Will would be willing to risk hurting his kids for something purely physical with Alicia. I think Jennifer must be nuts to not be in love with Will anymore. I'm still curious to find out what the heck is wrong with her. How could she possibly cheat on him, repeatedly? Though, I have no sympathy for her. It drives me kind of crazy that these characters (Alicia on the show and Will in this story) stay with spouses who have been truly horrible to them. This isn't a simple disagreement, it's long term adultery, deception, lying, betrayal. The adulterers don't even seem to offer an adequate explanation or have sincere remorse. I can't imagine these loveless marriages, devoid of trust and communication, are actually better for the kids than divorce. Kids use their parents and parents' relationship as role models. Nobody's perfect but these marriages are exceptionally bad. I hope Will realizes this more than Alicia on the show did. I really hope you post again soon! I love this story and am anxious to see it unfold! |
Amynsieve chapter 6 . 10/12/2016 Come back to us please. I miss this story! |
Amynsieve chapter 6 . 8/27/2016 Yes! He wants to meet up with her! I love that they are both obsessing over each other and neither one knows how the other feels. It would be fun to watch them discover this. I so want Alicia to meet his kids, to have his son love her and his daughter, having greater insightfulness with age, see how much happier her dad is around Alicia. I still want to know exactly what Jenny did and am curious about why she works so much, if Will really doesn't think she's having more affairs, and how they act around each other. But mainly, I just want more Alicia and Will :) I love this new universe of theirs! Thanks for posting! |
guategal chapter 6 . 8/27/2016 Your Will torn between holding the family unite as is and becoming for real the single parent he feels like anyway is such a good mirroring of TGW Alicia's inner contemplative scenarios. Like how your Will loves and participates fuller in being a parent. Your Alicia pondering and excited with those past fond memories of her and Will flips the mirror well over to the other side. I so like this flip and am indeed anxious to read more of your clean articulated styled chapters. |
Latenightmom chapter 6 . 8/26/2016 I love the relationship Will has with his kids! I'm enjoying this ongoing debate inside of him, remaining faithful to his wife, who wasn't faithful to him, and taking under consideration his children, while all along he can't get Alicia out of his head. The scenes where Alicia debates sending him a message were a good read as well. I'm glad she ended up texting him. In the end. I'm very curious as to what happened with the trial, and his wife, and their reasons for moving to Chicago. I'm curious as to the character of his wife. You've given us a few glimpses, I'm just wondering what she is thinking, what her personality is like? I'm sure you'll get to more of that as this goes on. It will be fun to see how you bring Alicia and Will together. Great job. I'm definetely looking forward to more of this! |