wow, dark, but well done love to see more
BB

hoarse, not horse.

Please take more care with your proofreading, I would strongly recommend getting a beta.

nooooooooo it's not dead is it?!

I think Sophia is going to enjoy this training way too much.

Awesome story, will you continue it?

You know, for once, it would be nice to see Taylor become EVILE!

re reading this I can we that Taylor is bein mastered for real

great beginning. it's so horrifying

Hope to see how Taylor goes the superhero route!

Oh god the cliffhanger... Great job so far looking forward to more!

(I'm a horribly sadistic person, keep up the great work!)

My favorite fic so far. Of the hundred or so I've read, this by far is in the top 10. Thank you, sir, for delivering this absolutely fantastic piece of fiction.

Hell, I find myself laughing out loud several times, a wide grin on my face.

There's at least one error, a misplaced "your" where a "you're" should be.

Well, with this arc resolved, what will Taylor/Kilgrave do next?

Just found this, and I am really liking it. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see Taylor's POV again as she sees Kilgrave go over the line again and again. Hopefully she quickly comes to see his viewpoint. I think there could be a lot of fun later on with everyone following her commands. She will have to look out for the PRT though since they do have protocols set up to deal with Masters like her.

Kilgore is really sick. Wonder what he'll do with Madison?