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AshersWeasley chapter 20 . 2/26 U know, me being the sad person I am, I've read about 200 HP fanfics mostly based on Fred. And this one is the best I've read by far. It's bloody amazing plz continue some of us lonely ppl need more action in our lives and this how I get it. It's mad how the smallest fanfics can change my view on a character completely. And right now Ronald bloody Weasley is the biggest git to ever exist, I think. Well done its bloody brilliant |
vampdiaries5698 chapter 20 . 1/25 Its been two years, oh please please please can you finish it out? Just do a few more that involves everyone finding out shes back and seeing her, and finding out about her and Fred and then do an epilogue of either and engagement or a wedding between them! |
Italianbookworm chapter 20 . 1/26/2019 Please please please come back to this story someday! It's absolutely fabulous and I love it. I keep coming back, rereading, and hoping one day I'll see an update. |
fairylightinthenight chapter 20 . 6/16/2018 Brilliant! I hope you continue |
Raven that flies at night chapter 20 . 1/22/2018 Now what is the world is so shocking about lavender |
FlowerChild23 chapter 20 . 1/19/2018 Well this should be good |
kathiesmith69 chapter 1 . 1/14/2018 Dear Author, I have sincerely enjoyed this story so far. Please give consideration to completing it. You have sucked me in. I couldn't stop reading waiting to see where you were going next. The cliff hanger in chapter 19. Ugh and no more updates. Here's to hoping you complete it. |
tab1012 chapter 18 . 12/30/2017 Magnifique chapitre 19 , y aura t'il d'autres chapitres ou pas ? |
tab1012 chapter 19 . 11/15/2017 Superbe histoire , y aura t'il une suite ou pas ? |
Guest chapter 19 . 11/4/2017 Are you gonna finish this? |
Guest chapter 19 . 11/3/2017 Please update! I just love this story |
annetteleh88 chapter 19 . 7/24/2017 OMG! I did not see THAT coming! |
Raven that flies at night chapter 19 . 7/23/2017 Oh dang well that took a twist. I am see what happens. |
ZoeyOlivia chapter 19 . 7/22/2017 Wow... I have to remind myself to never read the comments. Anywho. Why is Ginny being so weird, she was livid at Hermione, burned her letters and said she'd have to basically grovel to get into her good graces. So for her to avoid Harry's eye contact at the table and the. Inquire so casually about it all before bed just seems weird, like maybe she had a hand in it. Maybe not, but that was the vibe I was getting. Also guest, combat experience or not, brothers sucker punch each other all the time. So really, while it's likely Ron will get him back (that's just the way some brothers work) he's not going to go all combative and try to kill his brother for a broken nose so chill the fuck out. |
thatwritermadeofpotatoes chapter 19 . 7/22/2017 Ooooh, he's going to be a werewolf! That' so exciting, and such an awesome plot twist, I honestly wasn't expecting him to full-werewolf it. This was very good, I like the emotion and the tension you're bringing to the table! I really like how you woke Spencer up, even if it's in a totally painful/dark way. It surprised me, because they were all laughing and joking around-the tattoo was a very good idea and a great transfer subject. Very well done, OP. One thing, though, that bugs me a tad is the grammar. I love your adjectives and imagery, all that jazz really, but you have little to no punctuation in some areas. It's very hard for the reader when they find a good story, but it's read haltingly in their mind due to no periods or no commas, or no clear end or beginning of dialogue. Have you tried a beta reader? I'm one, if you want to give it a go. If not, maybe the word processor you use can help, or you can find another beta reader to help proof your work. It's a lot having to write/edit/publish your own work, especially when you have other things going on in life. It might be easier to write it, and then hand it off to be grammar-checked by someone, have it given back to you, and publish it from there. I can't wait to read another one of your chapters! :) |