I read 41 chapters for this bullshit ending? WTF not worth it rushed and you didn’t even explore their relationship if anything you made it clear that they’re so bad at communication they’ll be broken up in a month

WOW! What a waste of time. Edward and Bella are just some fucking idiots. The story was not worth it. If you read the reviews before to see if you should read it don’t her characters are just a bunch of assholes that spend the whole story apart they literally get together on like chapter 38 and if the story of their journey would’ve been told well it would be worth it. DO NOT READ THIS STORY ! You will be disappointed

Wow, he shows up and...well, that was easy. And I really hate easy Bella.

To the guest reviewer who have a problem with my review why don’t you stop hiding behind guest and show your self coward . I’m not telling anyone what to think . Bella left Edward walk out on her man with her damn friend Blindsided him . Then get jealous and acts like a jilted wife because he moved on after 3 years . Everyone was blaming him for not dumping his fiancé because god forbid Edward sleeps with anyone other than Bella who left him . So why don’t you do us a favor and fuck of . Or better yet why not sign in you cowardly bitch . And if I did have a daughter she would definitely not be anything like this Bella who think there is co consequence for her actions .

I am not saying that what Edward did was right. He shouldn't have felt so affronted that Bella chose her career over him. In fact she did not! Why can't a woman have both? They could have tried long distance relationship. But that doesn't mean that Bella was completely faultless. When you are in a relationship you involve your partner in your decision. That doesn't mean letting your partner govern your decisions it just means making them feel a part of your life. Instead of just dropping that bomb on Edward, Bella could have calmly discussed her decision with him. She could have made him understand how important that offer was for her career. If he had not accepted it even then, then there was no point in salvaging that relationship. But she didn't do any of it and this made her just as responsible for the demise of her relationship as Edward.
Now if Edward moved on after their breakup then it's not his fault. He had every right to move on just as Bella had. It was Bella's decision to not move on because she was unable to do so but that doesn't mean that he'd stopped her from moving on. Now, when he arrived for closure what he did was a little assholish. He might have led her on and got angry at Paul when he had no right to be angry at him but still at the end of his stay he made it clear that it was a goodbye. So even if he slept with someone after breaking up with Irina it wasn't wrong. If anyone should have been offended, it was Irina. Because he had just ended a relationship with her and then slept with someone else so soon. She should have been the one who was upset. Bella didnt even enter the equation. They were over a long time ago. Even if they still had feelings for each that didn't change the fact that were not together for years. Not to forget that Bella did date Paul in that time. Did she forget that? It was hypocritical of her to make Edward feel so bad for doing something which shouldn't have affected her. It all happened when they weren't together and to Edward's credit he did wait for some time before trying pursue Bella so that it didbt appear as a rebound. I couldn't even will myself to read the last chapter. I'm sorry if this seems a little harsh but I just stated what I felt.

Good story but they never told all the things they needed to say to each other. Like your grandparents made me feel like shit and I felt the need to prove myself and you never called or made it feel like I mattered to you. I mean when she left to ny she was single but that was Edwards choice. She wanted a long distance relationship for a bit. None of this was said. And than he leaves his fiancé for her but sleeps with someone else and doesn't call her for months again leaving her last priority. Why would she say yes to marriage when none of this was hashed out.

Wow! These 2 don't communicate at all! However, Bella did the right thing. Edward is engaged & says he loves Irina! Game over! He should not try to line up Bella as a replacement or have her in the bag before he breaks it off with Irina. Edward wants to be free to choose? Then become single & free & then & only then can you talk to Bella about a relationship.

Love love this story.. awesome.. a lot of up and down with ExB that made you want to scream at them lol but as alway they figured it out tho I did have my doubts a few times and thought you might a surprise in there with "no happily ever after" with them lol.. thanks for sharing an amazing story;)

Really enjoyed this story.

Thank you so much.

Great story - I like HEA endings! - So much miscommunication, tho, how sad. I think they placed too high expectations on each other, tho. - Since this is one review for the whole story, I have to say one part I was disappointed by was that Edward must have let a lot of time go by before replacing his phone (when she first left for NY). Usually when you replace your phone, you get the same number. I mean, Bella even called him from NY, and he didn't get the calls? Again, miscommunication. And another thing I was disappointed in was that maybe 3 years can be a long time, but he gave up on her and got engaged to someone else? (And then flaunted it in her face?) And Emmett took him out to get laid? Ugh! Men!
As you can see by how much I am interacting with your characters, I really enjoyed this story. Thanx for sharing your talent.

Absolutely lovely! I loved it!

So she should understand Edward . Stupid bitch

I liked this story even though I stayed aggravated at Bella and Edward much of the story. But it worked ok. I would love to see a future take or outtake with Edwards family and Charlie now that they got together.

Perfect!

YES, Finally!