bawled my eyes out..

SO going to fav...love how you included lolu and nali, but centered it aroung nalu. Love u for that.

Well that was sad. And quite heartbreaking too. Why their last words? I would love a soulmate, but if I didn't know who they were until I was about to die then I think I would rather never know. Less heartbreak that way.
But this was still a beautiful story. I loved it.

why would you hurt me in this way?

Oh my goodness, this was so beautifully tragic! It brought tears to my eyes! What an awesome albeit sad concept/prompt. And your writing is superb! Well done:)