Good story! Now it’s time to complete it!

I would really love to read more

Very sweet...more? :D

Cuz. Keep up the writing please

Nice, keep it coming.

Another great chapter, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

Good took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

Another great chapter, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

Good took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!
Another great chapter, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

Good took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

Another great chapter, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

Good took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

There are Angels
God put on this Earth
Who care for us and guide us.
You can feel their love and gentleness as they walk through life beside us.
They do great things for us every day they whisper in our ears, they even hold us in their hearts when we are filled with all our fears.
They are always there to give us a hug and try to make us smile.
They treat us with the respect and love, they treat us like their own child.
God blessed me with an Angel, I’m proud to call my own.
She’s been with me throughout my life, been with me as I’ve grown.
She’s guided me the best she can, she’s taught me like no other, and I’m thankful I’m the lucky one who get’s to call her
Mother

I commend you for writing but I would suggest having someone review each chapter before posting. Also, the term 'fallen angel' is a reference to a prostitute. I would not use it for Elizabeth unless you have her character living that life due to circumstances beyond her control.

This has potential. Find a beta with strong grammar skills; there are issues with past and present tenses, modern v. Regency word choices, and inappropriate adjective use e.g. most handsomest.

Why does Darcy refer to a woman he doesn't know and never met as "fallen"?

"to whom am I speaking"
not
"WHOM are you"
Haven't read any further after reading that, couldn't stomach it.

Most handsomest is a redundancy. Do not change tences when telling the story (she was and wears). It is "who are you." The grammar errors are enoungh to keep me from being able to finish the story. I highly recommend investing in a new grammar book if you like writing.