Nice little interlude! Very sweet, shows some action and allows for a little goofing off during patrol. Good work!

Delightful

it's amazing! I love big bro dick! And actually nice dami!
Great job on this!

This was so sweet and fluffy. I love those two together, their relationship is just so sweet.

Your writing was very good. Good attention to detail, and good representation of your choice characters.

I enjoyed reading this one-shot very much. Thank you for sharing :)

this storyvwas so cute. 10/10 :D

Love it

Great work! Well written, and damn it. Those two are my weakness. They were the best.

Loved the dialogue in this, I find that a lot of people seem to have trouble with writing it for Damian but you nailed it. I'd happily read more stories about these two if you write them.

This was nice, a good and rather light and fluffy read. Still had it's reflective moments though. I admit I'm a sucker for good Damian and Dick interaction though and this is definitely that. About feedback...did you mean to have three Es in squeed? Also when Damian is eyeing the banister, you forgot the second E and in the sentence preceding it, Dick asks a question and you seem to have accidentally ended it with a period. Last thing, right after the fight while they head to the ice cream store, you have, 'he would never pass up the chance to show the kid with affection.' Or close to that, the word 'show' in particular but that entire sentence and sentence where Dick is guiding them to the ice cream parlor are rather awkwardly worded. Maybe try reading them aloud and seeing where the natural pauses are. Or go with what sounds nice. Sorry, most of that was just spelling, or vague awkwardness, I'm not so good with grammar and punctuation myself. Hopefully it's sort of helpful though. Have a good week!