| Reviews for Like Smoke Into the Sand |
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Lii-yu.Madara chapter 8 . 12/17/2018 One of the most beautifully written pieces I have had the pleasure of reading in a while. Took me a little while to find the time skips, but it was so well written. The paragraphs were not too long. I wonder how much time and thought went into Gaara’s character, it truly was consistent. Heck, the whole story was both cohesive and consistent in character building and plot. |
lovleydragonfly chapter 7 . 8/8/2018 OMG I love this so much. Please update more! |
Dvasia chapter 1 . 2/26/2018 Absolutely beautiful story. I don't see many Arabian-inspired stories around, so this was an amazing find. Will continue to follow this story and wait for updates! |
Howzlife chapter 7 . 10/6/2017 Thankyou for bringing this into creation. It's amazing. |
Sealing Mistress chapter 7 . 10/2/2017 Oh my goddess, I am so thankful that I found this beauty of a fanfic hidden among the sea of fanfics. I can't say how much this story is truly making my brain go haywire and I definitely can't stop analysing this work of art before bed. This is absolutely amazing and most definitely a very interesting fanfic, I haven't come across a fanfic where the background information of the culture and settings blends beautifully, and the OC are unique and not overwhelming unlike some fan fictions I have come across. I absolutely adore the way you portray Gaara and Naruto, it's charming to see authors write true to the character. Anyway, my apologies for my rambling. I cannot wait for the next update and oh, do your take your time because every chapter of yours is a great read regardless how long it takes. |
Clearhorse chapter 7 . 9/29/2017 More Please! |
TigrezzTail chapter 7 . 9/24/2017 I'm just kinda surprised Gaara didn't get frustrated and wipe the menace out sooner. Interesting how Naruto has gotten into his head. |
Orioseo chapter 6 . 5/8/2017 Ohhhhh my gosh I absolutely LOVE ancient Arabian mythology, especially involving Jinns, and to see my OTP in here in my favorite setting?! It's too much for me ...*swoons* Ahem, anyways. I love this so much. I binged it. You deserve hoards of treasure for crafting this masterpiece. I eagerly await more! |
TigrezzTail chapter 6 . 3/21/2017 Hm, so we finally find out the rest of the story. But we can tell that Gaara isn't really Shukaku. Otherwise, how could he have changed so much as to be interested in Naruto, right? I am glad that Naruto was able to appeal to Gaara on some level. Hopefully he won't be resentful and standoffish. After all, if Naruto died, Gaara wouldn't have anyone to be interested in anymore, right? |
emillyn.figueiredo.5 chapter 5 . 3/4/2017 Please continue the story |
Guest chapter 5 . 12/14/2016 I really like this story! It's interesting and very well-written! There just isn't enough fics about Gaara and Naruto. Please continue! |
Faery66 chapter 5 . 12/8/2016 Hope to read more soon. D |
TigrezzTail chapter 5 . 10/14/2016 Yeah, I'm with Naruto. Why on earth would Gaara be amidst such a large group of people? And that one sheikh seemed intent on singling out the obvious foreigner. Question is why he seemed so intent on getting a look at Naruto's face. I wonder if Konoha ever bothered to put out a notice on his disappearance? With the possible trouble, though maybe it's a good thing that Gaara is close by. |
faithfreedom chapter 4 . 8/23/2016 Amazing! I'm so glad you updated! Your story is amazing! Can't wait till the next one :D |
TigrezzTail chapter 4 . 8/22/2016 I can sympathize with the desire to be historically accurate. I was part of one of the Medieval Reenactment groups we have in the US. I even used that as a basis for a project I had to do in Technical Writing class. Hm, well I'm glad to see that even the hardest of the tribe are finally coming around regarding Naruto. And that he's found fighters that work 'better' for him after a fashion. I wonder if he'll start picking up their style that way? I wonder if he's ever rambled to Gaara about the life he had back in Konoha and how he had got into trouble in the first place? |