A little confusing, everything seems to be scattered everywhere! There is promise, you need to fine tune your stories.

why exactly did both of them not take tippy. Dobby did so tippy should have been able to aswell

Leaned a bit too hard on 'support tradition', as since Molly broke it, she should have no magic, by the logic you defined. Also made Harry look like the bad guy, as while he did play his interest in Hermione as a distraction, he seemed to blame her for not knowing that he was dating someone.

Not sure how Bill will play into this, as we know how he ended up in canon.

Looking forward to where it might go.

The Carrow Twins (younger) - Apparently NOBODY realized that there is a *prequel* to this story - that focusses on Flora and Hestia in particular. Flora and Hestia were discovered to be the children of Amycus and Alecto (AKA Scylla and Charybdis AKA Bad and Worse of the Death Eaters). Children of *that* degree of incest are proscribed - even among purebloods; to avoid being *put down*, Flora and Hestia actually convinced the Wizengamot to sentence them to a Bonding of Servitude to Harry Potter for Life. (Yes - he was there; the trial and sentencing took place in Courtroom Ten. Does Harry like it? Heck to the no. Is he stuck for it? Unfortunately for him, heck to the yeah. READ THE DANGED PREQUEL, FLAMERS.)

Crap

Nice short story. Thank you for the share. Said about Hermoine. Look forward to reading more of your works

Cute :3

How come he does not profess any love for Hestia/Flora?

Harry has the Elder Wand...he could have just removed the poison.

I thought Hermione would only get pregnant if Harry had wished for her to?

Huh, that escalated quickly. Is Harry that way with his betrothed though? I was getting the impression that he was generally gentle and loving?

Ooh, feisty Susan. I did not see that coming. It is unfortunate that Amelia died, poor susan :/

I mean Flora kind of contradicted herself. She is defending the accusation of Harry being a slave driver while threatening to essentially make him a slave owner..Does she now believe in her defense of him? Or does she actually think Harry would enslave Hermione? I get that he might be mad at her but I don't think he would ever enslave her, maybe cut off all ties with her, but I don't think he would actually consent or be persuaded to enslave her?

Hey, I have no problem with the twins as long as they are genuine in their affection?

Great story. I feel like hermione and Harry needed a heart to heart after they died. She told him she was pregnant and their son died with her. But he never hugged her or said sorry or cleared the air in any way. He should of said something before returning to life