With you?"

"No, with the Queen. Of course with me!
Lol snarky draco

Woah- what going on?
Luv the premise and mystery aspect of it!

Well, I have to say this, and I know I won't regret it but Hermione is a Bitch, if I were Harry I would end my friendship with her.

Ahh there is entirely too much crazy going on! And I love maniacally-loyal!Harry.

Ah this fix is so delightfully gory and I love all the yelling, and now I'm really confused, so I'll probably stay up reading all night again. But who need sleep when there's fanfic?

Omg the way you have left the simmering tension of the dead body RIGHT NEXT DOOR is just brilliant!

That was an absolutely terrifying beginning! I'm lying in bed reading this on my phone and wishing I'd waited till morning! Great, though. Classic last-moments-of-victims-life opening.

That was an absolutely terrifying beginning! I'm lying in bed reading this on my phone and wishing I'd waited till morning! Great, though. Classic last-moments-of-victims-life opening.

Whoa, this is fic is twisted! It was a good ending, but I just didn't believe that Ron would be Mortel. I think someone else would have been more believable. The twist at the end of the story was awesome. I think it was good that it didn't turn out to be Morgan, he's a nice geezer. I didn't really get the chapter when Draco realised what actually happened, it is very confusing, even when I went back to read it. All in all, it is honestly an amazing story, so good work! D

I read this story years ago and it's still one of my favourites in the HP fandom

I love the atmosphere, the murder mystery and the way you portrayed Harry and Drao's relationship. It's too bad the sequel is still a WIP, but I can understand moving on from the fandom. Anyways, thanks for sharing this fanfic with us, I enjoyed reading it very much

That was a great story! I love how the plot is so original- a rare thing in Drarry fanfiction. xD I read it all in one day... I just couldn't stop! Lol, I'm gonna check out the sequel now. Great job. :)

So I don't understand. First you say it's Morgan in the room with Harry, then change it to Ron. The little girl who was released by Mortel grabbed blond hair, not orange so has the killer been polyjuicing? Thirdly, Steel the cat has been in the chapters, same time as Draco and you made Draco's animagus form a black (with a potion) cat with silver eyes. Is there another identical cat they have that somehow disappears near the end or what is the significance? They aren't the same. Did Draco only turn into the cat at the end or were there other times. On another note- I though Hermione was killed by Morgan/ Ron with a nail through the eye, which would have to be a pretty long 3 inch long nail to of even reached her brain, even then not killing her. "She moved" alludes to what? moved in front of the nail trying to pin her hand to the wall? Other than this, good story and looking forward to reading the sequel tomorrow.

Wow. You have me very intrigued.

This story is a few years old so it's completed, but I just thought I'd review it because I'm addicted already! :D

God that was brilliant!

Great story, thanks so much for writing it! Absolutely love it, loads of twists! :D :D

Abs x