| Reviews for The Moon Huntress |
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Guest chapter 18 . 8/12 WTF why are the warnings at the end of the chapter?! |
Maddie Rose chapter 21 . 9/6/2017 Honestly Kate is trash and I despise how badly she treats Nora. DAMN DEREK AND NORA AT THE END THERE. Why must you do this to me? I need more smut now. |
Maddie Rose chapter 20 . 9/6/2017 Awww good on the Sheriff for offering Nora a job! Maybe it'll give her some much-needed stability considering her wild family situation at the moment. Allison definitely knows something is wrong and she's sick of things being kept from her, which I can totally understand. |
Maddie Rose chapter 19 . 9/6/2017 So slowly beginning to catch up on this, what an amazing chapter as always. I love that Laura defended Nora and that they were friends, but it's so sad that Nora still has so many lost memories of her past. She's incredibly protective of Allison and I don't blame her, but her sister is certainly bound to find out everything that's going on eventually. Poor Nora, she really just wants to look out for her. |
YourpalMoony chapter 21 . 8/22/2017 How Coud You Tease Me Like That I NEED THE SMUTS NOWWWWWWWWWWWW!1! That was damn hot, and I was so READY, but noooooo, you had to go pull that move on us. Great chapter! Kate needs to die, love her and the Sheriff. really love her and Derek, cuz godamn! |
YourpalMoony chapter 20 . 8/2/2017 What a tense and uncomfortable start, I mean that in a good way obvious. So much tension between Eleanora and Chris, damn. I love how these two sort of sass each other, I see where Eleanora gets it from haha. Yikkkkeeeess trying to get rid of Nora? heh, we both know it won’t be that easy. This whole conversation seems so cruel. YEAH FUCK YOU CHRIS! No really, he’s fine ;] I love how you write about the Argent family, you make them that much more relatable for a hunter family. Nora really changes the dynamics which is great, she doesn’t blend into the background, she really stands out as an oc. |
ocfairygodmother chapter 20 . 7/27/2017 I LOVED the Chris/Nora scene. There is so much tension between the two of them. Part of me just wants to knock their heads together and tell them both to grow up and figure their crap out! haha. Although, knowing both of them-that probably wouldn't work very well. It would only make things worse! lol. Thank you SO much for taking the time to write your chapter and your story in general. I know how much hard work goes into the process and I appreciate all the hard work you put into it! Thank you for being willing to share this with us! I love reading your story! Love you, Heather! I look forward to reading more of your awesome story whenever you get a chance to update! Just know that I appreciate everything you put into this! Thank you, my friend! :) |
Princessdarkness12 chapter 20 . 7/21/2017 I like how this chapter is a breather from the angst in the previous chapters. It adds more to Nora’s character in her having relationships outside of the family and the pack. I wonder how Nora’s relationship with Allison will change when the secret comes out. Will Nora train Allison instead of Kate in canon? |
YourpalMoony chapter 19 . 6/18/2017 I live for Nora and laura, like their names rhyme! We need more flashbacks, can you just bring her back from the dead? somehow? So they can be brotp af, or Nora can be like BYE DEREK. I am loving the interaction and friendship building you have with her and Stiles, it's so genuine and wholesome, and flows so naturally. He's trying his best to look out after her and its so THE ENDING, WHY YOU DO THIS WITH THE ANGST? so rude :( |
swanqueen4 chapter 19 . 5/25/2017 I love getting more backstory! Thanks for the update! |
SusieSamurai chapter 19 . 5/23/2017 I thought I was ready, but I was not. This is why we can't have nice thingsbecause you continuously put them through emotional torture! Hahahaha which is probably pretty high praise for you. I really enjoyed this chapter however shorter it was than usual. As always Stiles and Nora steal the show (stila? Stira? Niles? Noles?) lol and I am not complaining. Does this mean we're getting the daddy/daughter showdown I've been waiting for? In a moment of high-strung emotion will demon-kate-bitch-face be exposed? I will try and wait patiently to find out haha |
ocfairygodmother chapter 19 . 5/23/2017 Oh Scott and Stiles...of course you two...haha. More Laura and Nora feels? You-you're messing with my heartstrings! haha. And then Derek being there. Gah! The feels! The feels I am feeling! haha. And then Nora interacting with Stiles. I love their back and forth way of things! haha. Alright! I am now, all caught up! Again, thank you again for writing such a fabulous story. It is obvious that you have put your heart and soul into this and it shows! Thank you so much! :) Good luck on writing more! Whenever you are able to get more out, we'll be here! :) Love ya! |
ocfairygodmother chapter 18 . 5/23/2017 Let's just say that I already knew I was in for a roller coaster from the title. haha. Kate. Did I ever tell you that I strongly dislike her? haha. But you characterize her perfectly! Does that even make sense? You write her so that I hate her and empathize with Nora. Nice! And then getting to find out more about the past...and Laura. *sniffles* You, you sure know how to mess with my feels! haha. Thanks for the hard work! |
ocfairygodmother chapter 17 . 5/23/2017 Is it weird that I like Coach & Nora's relationship? haha. I feel like that's the most 'normal" relationship she has. A sense of normalcy. Who woulda thunk? haha. (Yes, I know terrible grammar. Although my spellcheck isn't telling me it's wrong. haha) Also, Peter is a creeper. But I suppose that's a given, huh? haha. And gaaahhhhhh! Gabe! Any time he's mentioned, it just leaves me wanting to hug Nora...although, she might not like that. haha. Nice job on this one too! |
ocfairygodmother chapter 16 . 5/23/2017 NOOOOOOOO! WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO MY NORA! (Ok, I'm getting rather protective. haha. Don't worry! I completely trust what you're doing and where you're going. I'm just battling some feels. haha!) Awesome job with this chapter! Thanks for taking the time to write it! :) |