Hey, “Light Wind and Dreams”, isn’t that the name of Nakajima Atsushi’s book? That’s a neat reference right there

Thanks for writing! Really love the MC & accuracy to the story. I hope some day you can come back to this, but if not, thanks again!

hehe I love this. it's so good

I'm terrified with the fact of what if she gets buried while she is in the Void? Wait don't they cremate corpses in Japan over burial?

I love the narrative! I like everything!
Although it has not been updated in a long time, I will always have this story in mind for being the first BSD ff that I have read and left me delighted and wanting more (indirect "please gimme more", anyone?)
Greetings!

So fuuuuun... in a strangely disturbing way

Good job!

That last line ... she doesn't know anything. Oh my god, she doesn't know anything !
Great job!

So interesting!
(Gah, damn typos, it's brilliant)

OH.
MY.
GOSH.
Bloody briliant!

I love this fic. Every now and then something reminds me of it and I just come back and read it all over again. Its hard to believe it hasn't been updated since 2017 because I van still recall my favourite scenes from this story very clearly even now. I hope you will come back to this story one day and feel inspired to continue writing it.

Why?

Akira is kinda cute in her flaws and general observations. Although the life she spent mostly blacked out is slightly alarming, all those deaths really did a number on her psyche. The mysterious people had a hand in forming her may be the cause of her erratic trauma. I want to see more sides of her, she's like a friend you just got to know but there's so much to learn. Would you consider adding in scenes of Akira doing other missions without Atsushi though? So we can see more of her personality without her brother buffering between her and the others. Or well, so we don't rehash episodes all the time. How many deaths did Akira go through at this point in time? Between the tiger and attacks, maybe around 100?

I'm so proud of Atsushi, he's the one with real progress and growth even if he's trying to cover for his sister. Atsushi probably will still fear that bloodthirsty part of his sister and her death for quite a long while yet. Considering Atsushi wants freedom and independence, I'm predicting Akira will end up super hurt or distant because the one clinging usually does.

Will you do another chapter it’s getting really really good

Hm interesting