Hey! I don't review much (I've been meaning to start though!), but I just had to say how much I've enjoyed your story over the years. You've done an incredible job characterizing David and the other boys, and your OC Regine is just perfect! She's just the right amount of spunky and awesome while still being human enough to relate to :) You've done an incredible job with this, and I hope you'll continue to post new chapters!

Though I may be ashamed to admit it, I had to re-read this story again since I've been gone for 2yrs. Still, it's mouth watering good! Loved the most recent chapters too. The way you have always described their interactions are down right addictive. I've always said that your take on David is great and nothing has changed my mind yet. I'm already ready for ch20! Can't wait to see where you will continue to take this story.

Hey! i just binge ready this story today and i’m hooked! it is so well written and I can’t wait to read more! please post again soon :)

I missed them a lot. & as usual, it’s another amazing chapter! 333

Fabulous chapter!

I was wondering... since 8Tracks has been removed is there any other platform we could listen to the story soundtrack to?

Such a yummy chapter, I was really looking forward to reading this. I really can’t wait to see the “more where that came from”. I’d follow David for that too lol.

words cannot express how THRILLED i am that this is updating again! i got the notification last night and almost
threw my tablet in joy!
You write David better than anyone I’ve seen, and Regine is such a fun character! This story has me on the edge of my seat and i can’t wait to read more! Very, very well done!

This is by far THE BEST Lost Boys story I've ever read! It's absolutely amazing. I really hope you'll write more someday!

I absolutely love this book. I really missed seeing the relationship between them. Can’t wait until you post again!

Ohmygoodness! This really lit up my entire week, seeing an update for the best Lost Boys fic on the internet!

So glad you've returned! And just in time for Halloween. Still love this story and your writing. I really hope you post part 2 sooner (like now?) than later. Just when things started to get exciting you left us hanging. Are they going to leave the party so David can really show her what she is? Maybe to the cave? Will they finally give in their attraction? Ready and waiting for the real action. Thanks for posting! Keep it up. We missed ya!

The update was okay. I was expecting more, I guess. This feels a little anemic on some level.

Soooo okay. I used to follow stories and leave feedback in this fandom. Now I only leave feedback for writers who are consistent. Why? Because I’ve been burned too many times by people writing LB stories who just stop writing. The stories languish with zero explanation or communication from the author. I have more respect for those writers that take the story down then just let it hang unfinished for obscene amounts of time. I understand that real life comes first. We all have jobs and school and stuff going on. On the flip side if a writer walks away for (in some cases) years and then updates? I find it disgusting. How are readers supposed to know if you’re serious or not about finishing? There are way too many LB writers in particular guilty of this and it always makes me glad to see how few reviews the story gets when this happens. The attitude of abandoning my story for a year or more without a word and coming back pretty much smacks of the renewed desire for attention and not genuine love for the story or readers. I did not read the chapter aside from the note and won’t be back.

hell yes! i was in the lost boy mood again after moving across country recently this is perfect before halloween thank you!