| Reviews for Split |
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Guest chapter 1 . 1/6 I dont normally leave reviews but i really liked this fic and have reread so many times. The way you show the struggles she faces because of her other personalities taking over was probably the best part along with her slowly losing her mind and visiting the doctor. I know its been a while but i hope you updaye again. :) |
bbymojo chapter 36 . 12/9/2019 awww I just wanna give Riaru a tight big hug. poor girl would be feeling at such a loss.. and like Yu says, they're home but at what cost? they're definitely not out of the woods yet |
ohmyship16 chapter 12 . 12/6/2019 i dedicate this to this amazing chapter very well written fun fun fun writing is fun just like chewing gum gum but my life is done done cus society shun shuns my kind blind from the sun fun, hun you should know I'm insane to scared to be slaine ll make cringey tiktoks because I'm a stingy ticking time bomb waiting to blow up in a mess of ships, fish and chips needs dip tik tok tik tok the mouse runs up the clock because writing while chewing gum is fun fun but my time is done done My time is up up My life is going up up Higher than the sun which is fun fun going to a better place with an axe and mace My life is done done My time is up up Because i blew up up my life is over |
Xaphyr chapter 36 . 2/1/2019 Interesting! Can't wait to see what happens now, to bad that I have to wait. |
R.K.Stryker chapter 13 . 11/20/2018 Oh I just realized that line of “Killed. I killed. Have I killed?” Like how black haired Kaneki is “Killed”., white haired Kaneki is “I killed”,. And Haise is “Have I killed?” Can’t believe it’s sort of similar to the 3 splits |
NK9 chapter 9 . 11/2/2018 I don't understand why everyone thinks you have to wait 24 hours to report a missing person. With reasonable suspicions you can call immediately. (Side rant) I'm liking th story so far |
R.K.Stryker chapter 31 . 10/1/2018 You might find it strange but I’m actually loving Nanashi |
Shadowing chapter 36 . 9/29/2018 Yay. She’s home. But for how long? |
Guest chapter 13 . 9/28/2018 I like the quotes (you made?) from the Black Goat's Egg but her personal ones are cringey af. |
Guest chapter 4 . 9/27/2018 Why Yoshimaru? Isn't the Manager's name Yoshimura? |
bbymojo chapter 35 . 8/24/2018 Awww I was hoping they’d stay with Team Kaneki but shouldn’t have been surprised since it’s Nanashi lol I’m enjoying this a lot, the plot is moving along quite well :) |
bbymojo chapter 33 . 8/24/2018 Oooh! Now we’re cooking! So excited. :p (Sorry if this is a stupid question or if I just missed it) what made Tsukiyama think Riaru was Kaneki? Was it the one-eye kakugan? Also, would suggest adding something to show changes in character POV (whether subtle or obvious) just to lessen confusion because I had to read it again just to sort of catch it? If that makes sense. Always grateful for your updates! On to the next chapter :p |
Alter Ego Bob chapter 35 . 8/24/2018 An update of any kind is always a treat, and chapters focusing on a transition between huge events are necessary. May I make a suggestion? When you switch perspectives perhaps indicate it via a line or dash or the sort, I know it may look gross to you as an author, but it will really help avoid confusion for than that small nitpick the chapter still maintained alot of the good quality writing that kept me hooked on it from the beginning while giving us some exposition about what is happening while the character is gone. Again, thank you for sharing your story, and don't fret too much about getting updates asap, take your time, let the words come to you because forcing yourself to write can only work to certain extent, and eventually it may make you hate writing which is never good. |
Guest chapter 35 . 8/23/2018 An update! Yay! I've been waiting for so long! |
Alter Ego Bob chapter 1 . 8/22/2018 I don't know what led me to look into the Tokyo Ghoul section after so long, but I am thrilled that I did. Honestly I clicked because it had Tsukiyama in it, but your character, despite my concern at first, is so interesting and unique. "They" on their own make up such a complex and intriguing plot that I could not put it down for even a moment. Other than the smallest of misspellings here and there it is really an amazing piece. I cannot wait to read more of it, and was very impressed by your talent considering your age. Either way, keep up the good work, and thank you for sharing your story with us. (Also, I would be very interested in seeing your fanart) |