Amigo sigue con la historia, esta muy buena

please add more chapters soon as possible i really like this story is cute

Nice story. Please update it, I want to find out what happens after starlight finds out that spike loves her?

welp 2 steps forward and 1 step back for spike, hopefully it works out for him, keep up the good work and hope you update soon

OMG Starlight learned Pinkie's hammerspace ability?!Q?Q? she's already dangerous enough with magic holy crap thats scary but lucky spike made her feel better, and I was thinking Spike should've known about rarity's shop in Canterlot but remembered he didn't have much screen time that season and he wasn't there helping them with her new shops, poor Spike this will probably down his mood even further so maybe he should run away to the one of the few places rarity hates going to the forbidden forest (i forgot the actual name where zecora lives)

clever mr. cake, very clever mr cake sir, now who else can spike get some advice from before he takes his sort of shot with Starlight... I would say discord but he's got too many screws loose or you could say he became that way after Celestia rejected him many many many years ago...

poor Spike being tortured by his feelings and Starlight flat out knows how to torture others LOL and Pinkie defying physics like always, sometime i wish Spike was slightly older like his teen form without the greed

awwww poor spike, hope he ignores rarity for a long time, nice start

Oh dude please please please continue this story! This is gonna be one epic story when its finished! I like romance stories that has a lot of story to it so please keep going!

Very nice job with this story, and yeah, I like Spike and Rarity's coupling, but this is a very good alternative to how he'd deal with her rejection if she doesn't love him back.

Keep the good writing.

Enjoying the story..needs more affections and cute stuffs... Maybe make Starlight not be interested in Spike and some girl pony likes him and then Starlight gets jealous because she realizes she really does like him...?

Kisses and awkward staring and cuddles and a pony wedding need to be involved?!

... Make them a couple and do a "Marmalade Boy" type of romance. - A show you can watch on youtube. With 76 episodes -

Fyi I only checked like a dozen times to see if you updated... Update more?

Amazing chapter :)

Great story!

Been looking for some Sparlight for some time and this is the best I've read so far~

Can't wait for the rest of the story!

Super adorable with dragon pony date at the donut place. Also I want donuts now...

Are we going to have to wait a long time until they are a couple? I want to see much love now!

Also I was joking about the 5000 word chapter... Even though you should update tomorrow with 5000 words and a spikysun kiss.

I myself did a story called Arthur:Perspectives. It has 33,000 plus words and 50 chapters. I updated like 28 chapters the first day cause I have no patience... I like your story a lot.

I wonder if I will ever find and be able to keep a true love...?

i admit it made me laugh.