Great work. I immediately started hearing it to "Ode to Joy," and (eventually) got inspired to track down the En-Gedi allusion. The lavèd/David rhyme was spectacular.

I particularly enjoy this with Hyfrydol or Ode to Joy. Holy Manna and Beach Spring are also good. Are there any specific melodies you thought of?

"Hail uncomprehended Light!"

Goodness, that was especially well done!

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