Loved it

I know I already said this, but I can't repeat enough how much I love this fanfiction. I have read and loved all of your works in the HP fandom, but this just takes the cake. It think I've reread it 5 or 6 times by now, and can't stop doing so. I absolutely love it! Thank you for being such an incredible author!

This is probably the best fanfiction of this type I've ever read. I absolutely love this! You actually managed to write a good fight scene, and this is an interesting unique perspective on the Marauders that portrays them as impressively good wizards. I loved everything about this and could read it over and over again. Please, please write more like this!

Can you like write about the dueling competition pleaseee?

wow always loved these three
happy they survived which is dudhuh as i know they do or else how harry will born but still happy for them
please do write more
bye sumi

This is just lovely and brilliant. I kind of want to read the immediate aftermath of this story too. Your writing is wonderful. Thank you for sharing.

could you please write a fiction on the duelling competion mentioned in the beginning of this chapter...
i am a fan of your fanfiction and THIS certainly is the BEST fiction i have read...

I Know that i already once reviewed on this story but I just could not help my self. I was looking thru my favorit stories and seeing this, it was like I was pulled in by an invisible force. I have read this story so many times but with every time I like it more.

I don't know what I'm writing, I just want to tell you how fantastic of an author you are

Love your works!
Saosa

Wow, they are brilliant :) So many useful spells

So fun to get to see Moody and Neville's parents and Aberforth...could totally see why Sirius likes him better.

Moody is the same as always

The bits about the chocolate and books were very cute...so nice to see the friendship.

What a note to end on

Is the old man Dumbledore's brother?

... remind me why peter betrayed absolute cuties like them again? AND DID YOU SEE THAT BARRIER?! THAT WAS AMAZING! my GOSH remus wasn't KIDDING when he said james and sirius were very bright was he?! *is in hyper awe right now* peter you're crazy... not that i'm saying sirius and james are invincible there ARE people stronger than them out there... BUT FUCKING STILL. *is now squeeing*

"the shield held steadfast no matter what Voldemort threw at it." You realize you just turned Sirius into a Gary Stu, don't you? Voldemort throws mainly unshieldable Unforgivables in a duel, and Sirius, a thirteen year old student somehow manages to throw up a shield that blocks them anyway?! That's way beyond competent, beyond precocious, that's superhuman, that's Gary Stu! I like a Sirius that's smart and cunning and above average power (but not as powerful as Dumbledore or Voldemort), but he's got to remain believable. The fight would have been much better if there were more than just two 13 year old kids doing all the fighting, and one putting up an impossibly powerful shield and still fighting like Dumbledore.

"physical", not "psychical".

Excellent chapter!

You are such an amazing writer. I love every single one of your stories.