I liked the story, very enjoyable
The only things that I might have a comment on are:
1. You added supers to the world, and mentioned them a lot, but there's no mention of an actual character that is a super. No reference to them in everyday life besides as a concept that are a thing.
2. I feel like this entire story could have fit into 10 chapters or less without feeling rushed. As it stands, it feels long winded with practically nothing happening in at least 5 of the different chapters and almost nothing in more. I actually read it all, so despite the stretch it reads well, but it was a near thing as some points.

This is meant as constructive criticism in case you want some feedback. No offence meant. Thank you for writing this story.

Peter should punch them all

Hey big fan here! I’ve read your fanfic and I got to say it’s amazingXD I’ve read this over a dozen of times and I can never stop reading No seriously, it’s true. well I’m not a writer kind of guy but I love to read.
Reading Deluge has me wishing that they make a movie or a comic out of this. The people who loves Spideypool will love it as will I ;D I will go way nuts if they do have it at sells. Ok I’m going way over myself.
Love Deluge and keep it up with your other fanfics

This was one of, if not THE best fanfiction I've ever read. The romance was perfect, and the way the author writes it pulls me completely into the story. It is a fucking SIN that this story has any less the 1k favorites and follows. Guys, please signal blast this book. It deserves so much more recognition.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, so cute. Spideypool for the win!

it's true I've seen tons of cop shows Deadpool isn't even close to what I've seen on third degree burn victims

we're my mutant spider bite I would die for his metabolism burn all this flab off and the sticking to walls thing would be fun

don't forget aliens and mutant turtles in the sewers XD NYC has all the crazy

great the whole batman reference now has me imagining deadpool wearing Bats costume and spidey Robins XD

THIS WAS SUCH AN ADVENTURE I READ
IT IN ONE DAY. THANK YOU FOR THIS FIC!

I love this fic ! So happy I found it on this site (I first read it on ao3).
100th

Love, love, love that you put Dopinder in here!

That was a wonderful story. :) In it's own way, I really appreciate that this story didnt really have action or focused on it. I usually prefer stories that have a balance between the mental and emotional sides of a story with the action and spoken sides - yet this story did so well to move forward that all the things they kept going through and experiencing didnt feel like it's repetitive nature. You did really well categorizing and describing this creature you developed and the bind between them you created. And their banter and casual relationship were on par! I genuinely enjoyed this read; I'm glad you embarked on it despite your light history in the fandom that you first admitted to. This bonded and emotional Spideypool pairing is definitely one of my favorites, particularly for it's acknolwedgment of other universes and versions of them. :)

Happyyyyyyyy~ Im proud of these kids and their relationship and how far each of them have come. More Aunt May! And a very grown up Deadpool. :)

That was pretty much exactly how I imagined the hold would work to keep Peter's soul anchored and heal it. :) I still don't entirely understand how it's work in a real sense, but I like it. The tension has been a lot of fun to read. -