Reviews for An Unlikely Tale
kalilje chapter 3 . 6/11/2016
omg please update soon:D
Guest chapter 3 . 6/8/2016
I love the story! It is different from any others that I have read. I have never really seen Narcissa play huge roles before. I like the way you express the emotions of the characters. Just reading how Harry doesn't have anyone to really care for him is sad. I hope that Narcissa and Lucius play great parental roles in his life. Also, I hope Draco can accept him. I look forward to your next update!
-CarlyReyes19
choclatbandit chapter 3 . 6/2/2016
Wow this chapter invoked intense dislike for Dumbledore and much sympathy for poor Harry. Great work
duchess of the damned chapter 3 . 5/28/2016
omg it's amazing
Veridissima chapter 3 . 5/18/2016
This was really good!
Really LIKED Narcissa with Harry
And the Malfoys are GREAT!
LOVED IT! PERFECT!
Toraach chapter 3 . 5/18/2016
I'm glad that this chapter is very long. More content for joy :)

I see that you changed a lot of things. The main idea behind characters is changed. Here Cissa and Lucius are good to Harry from the begining, in the old version Cissa was nasty torawd him.

I wonder how you will do next chapters. I hope that they will be also very enjoyable, and that Cissa will got pregnat and have a baby girl.

But still there is a lot of time for Draco and Harry to be civil for each other.
Veridissima chapter 2 . 5/15/2016
Ohhh... very interesting idea
And GREAT start!
Poor Harry and Draco... I'm curious to see how Harry got sick
Guest chapter 1 . 5/4/2016
I love itttttt! Can't wait for the next update!
Shetan20 chapter 2 . 5/5/2016
Thankyou for a very interesting story
Toraach chapter 2 . 5/5/2016
I see that you enchaced this chapter in the new version. I'm glad. Of course it had been excelent, but new version is similar in terms of plot. But I find a new explanation of their ilness more suited and better. I remember that someone wrote his concers about their conditions in a review for the old story.

I guess that they will be isolated in the hospital wing, in a special isolated part of that estabilishment, because the rest of the wing has to be open for students with normal medical problems.
Toraach chapter 1 . 5/5/2016
It's very sad with Harry. The Dursleys are one the same level as Voldi.

For Draco and the Malfoys. I'm glad that despite their political stances you write them as normal people. Authors ofthen don't recognize that DEs and purebloods are also people and they have feelings, families and emotions. Not all of them are like Voldi, Bella (in her madness) and Walpurga.

It's bad that Rowling didn't write a sister for Draco, who should have been anti-Hermione, because sadly in the books is a lack of interesting young school girls characters. Ginny is only prominent in the CoS and later some stuff with Harry romance, Luna is mad, and Hermione too mary sueish. But the most sad is that there is not a girl who is agaist them, and is well described. And Narcissa's daughter would have been a little blond angel, in a later years Hogwarts' femme fatale taught by Cissa how to dress properly and enchant every boy. And can you imagine how many stories people would have written with Harry and Draco's sister?
theslytherinrose chapter 2 . 5/4/2016
Harry should learn that antagonizing Severus isn't gong to end well. D: Poor Draco. Dumbledore knowing who's coming before they reach the door is definitely him, and he's scary when it comes to knowing way too much.
lunaz chapter 2 . 5/4/2016
Good start
Guest chapter 1 . 5/2/2016
Updaaaaaaaattttttttteeeeee
Maomaoyu chapter 1 . 5/1/2016
I love love loved it! Three year old Draco was precious and I'm still mad at Vernon for treating Harry like that... I hope that you continue this amazing story and have more chapters to come! Keep up the good work! (ω)
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