Oh man. How is Kurtis going to tell her? Does she have any idea bout the Lux Veritatis or will it all be completely new to her? And how can he train her without the gift himself? Will it still be doable? So many questions!

Aw, Lara was remembering the Vortex, wasn't she? :(

Also, the kiss? OMGFJSFJLSLAHSASHhaogh;owhogihqo;! :D :D :D :D
YES YES. HAVE SEX IN A BATTLEFIELD. DO IT.
Oh, they aren't? :-/
Wait. WAIT.
"Glad you came back to save me, stranger." :o *faints*

"Come on, M'lady, impress me. " "Come on, Kurtis, impress me." - I loved this :)

Awww, it's so sweet to see Kurtis like this! All dad-like and worried and afraid to hurt his girl or see her in pain! I also really liked Lara's rage, I definitely think she'd be the one to react like that.

Hahaha Kurtis you can't just march into a camp and demand they hand over a helicopter!
I see you remember from his bio that he's got his pilot license and is very skilled at flying :) A good start!

Love it!

The situation at the hospital was, again, very well described. I really liked how Lara was making her way through all the people there. Clever girl. ;D It was nice how Matt was taken aback by Lara's presence. :) I loved how protective Kendrick was and kept pushing people who got too close to Anna away with his crutch. Good to see that he managed to keep his energy. ;)
Too bad Kurtis seems to be so broken because of Anna's new condition. I hope that his attitude concerning the Gift will change. ;) It was kind of shock to get to know that people in the hospital didn't end up good. :( Sad. :(
It was nice that Anna could keep the Teardrop of Brahma. :) Lara was right, she definitely earned it. ;) I hope the sketch will turn out nice. ;D
What a touching note of Winston, too! :D I also loved Kurtis and Matt's chat near the end of the chapter. :D It was nice to see Kurtis so laid-back, given all the circumstances. Kurtis and Lara’s teasing concerning their admirers was another nice touch. Cute how both of them were a little bit jealous. ;D

The whole story was very enjoyable and well-written. It has many great moments, details and interesting original characters. I can't wait for more of Lara, Kurtis and Anna's story. Again, GREAT WORK. :)

Hi
What a great ending to a really well written story again. just sad its over soon but I liked Lara and Kurtis life together was very interesting and Anna also...
very good clapping hands :)
Hope there will be another story on its way

Aw, I was so excited to see the update, then of course so sad to find the story is over! :( but what a great ending to a really well written story. I loved the continuation of Lara and Kurtis' life together and I loved Anna. Hope you'll keep writing about their adventures as a family! Well done :)

Absolutely love this fic so far! Can't wait to see what happens next. The story is really gripping and I love the dynamic between Kurtis, Lara and Anna. I'm so grateful that you're continuing the series, I loved the Golden Seal and Lillith's Scepter. Looking forward to the next update!

What a harsh awakening for Lara! And what a tense situation followed! :O But I was really glad to see that Lara kept her calmness all the time.
I was feeling so sorry for Matt. He had to endure so much pain... :(
From the start I just knew that these explosions were announcing some great rescue action! It was so nice that Kurtis came back for Lara. :) I just didn't like that she kept calling him a fool. :P What an ungrateful... person. ;)
And are they crazy? They really need to teach how to tear away from each other sometimes! ;D They already have a child to take care of. No need to work on another one so rashly! xD
I'm curios about Anna's conditions very much!
What a great and very readable chapter. :) Pls update soon. ;)

Booom Bitch Here I am to review your chapter :D
First of all... Damn... Lara in that Bamboo Cage... Wow, just... Damn it, It's wonderfull. I love her throughs and the deal was so In character, I loved it! that Bad Cop is an asshole, damn it!
Now I want to kill him personally xD Kidding xD But maybeee *Enters in the story and kills the Bad Cop asshole and turns back home* Naaaah Kidding.
As you know, I have to be stupid in everything xD
The escape scene was awesome, I loved the action in it... Damn it.. Love it.
And... can we please talk about the Lara and Kurtis re-encounter... Perfect... Just perfect..
And that quote... Damn it that was the straw that broke the camel for Kurtis dearest :3 "Glad you came back to save me, stranger" and I bet the quote from Kurtis during... Erm... what they are doing xD ... could be "You made a mess of things haven't you?" DAAAAMN Fan girl squeal xD
Okay stop it xD
See you in next chapter Ana, and thanks for the amazing chapter :3

I'm totally loving this. I like the way it's so easy to follow and read, perfect for an action fic (specially since this is a TOMB RAIDER fic). I love Lartis and I love how you can show how much they care about each other without being dramatic or cheesy even tho when they're not together. And I like Anna for far. I can't wait to know how this ends. You make me miss this Lara SO MUCH. At least I "have" her thanks to you.

The whole chapter is very readable and gripping. :) There are many great (and even funny) moments. For example: I loved Anna's annoyance with the nurse calling her "the little girl", :D as well as the idea about Lara eating Rambo and spitting out his bones! LOL! xD On the other hand, poor Anna. It all must have been a horrible sight in the hospital. :( Nice to see Kendrick again! But I feel really sorry for Matt. He seems to be a good man. I really loved his thought about "a legions of angels"! LOL!... I felt really upset about Kurtis leaving Anna with Matt. But it's nice how Kurtis cares about Lara. I hope that Anna will be alright! And Kurtis will find Lara before something really bad happens. The only problem with the chapter I have is that there is not the next one. I just hope you will fix this as soon as possible. ;D What a MARVELLOUS chapter. :)

As I Promised
I've read your chapter sweetpie :3
I LOVED It! Like the other twos but... IDK.. Maybe this is my favorite chapter.
I loved the dialogues, the characters.
"Congratulation, a fourteen year old girl has tricked you" Best line ever! :D, Lara and Anna are so alike in that xD
Like mother like daughter w
I loved that Lara and Kurtis wanted to get impressed by each other... I've imaginated that in their voices and in that scenario... I had a.. Shiver... And I'm not kidding...
I can't wait for the next chapter :3

-AnyaVeritas