Reviews for The Harder They Fall
Sheila Barfield chapter 4 . 10/14/2018
Good twists!
UrsaEs chapter 4 . 11/27/2016
Good stuff this! :) I hope updates will be resuming, this is such an interesting story just crackling along with wit and intrigue :)
Guest chapter 3 . 7/30/2016
The premise of this story is so interesting and you write very well! I dearly hope it hasn't been abandoned. You have a great grasp of the characters voices and it's easy to imagine them in this setting. Your attention to detail, like this last chapter dealing exclusively with Gaby's struggle to just physically move Illya, really fleshes out the narrative. I'm very curious to find what Gaby is up to. From Napoleon's perspective, she certainly seems to be stalking Illya (which is true) with murderous intent, but I'm not so sure. She seems too concerned with injuring him as little as possible to just up and kill him when he comes to. I think too that she might be a little surprised to find that she likes him.
I wonder how both waverly and Gaby's uncle will come into play but I have a feeling that they will.
Anyway, I'm very intrigued to learn more about Gaby's motives and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter of this story!
Hannah Lynn McDonald chapter 3 . 7/4/2016
*growls* I do NOT like Gaby. How dare she?

And, alright, the only reason I'm reading this is because Ilya is terrific... And she's hurting ilya!

...is she from the film? I suppose I should watch it at some point... *sighs* I'm deeply prejudiced against it.
Hannah Lynn McDonald chapter 2 . 7/4/2016
Ooohhh! They're not spies! I adore this.

Mostly because you've done a bloody brilliant job capturing the characters - at least the original ones and even if it wasn't intentional I LOVE the McCallum case... *Grins - and this is an absolute pleasure.
Hannah Lynn McDonald chapter 1 . 7/4/2016
ILYA!

Brilliant writer and my favourite character!

...except I've a feeling this is based off of the reboot and not my actual favourite character but... I can pretend.
meangene1976 chapter 3 . 6/22/2016
LOVED The story so far, PLEASE say there is gonna be more to come! You are a fantastic writer!
DonR chapter 3 . 6/17/2016
What sort of story is this going to be?. Is she heroine or villianess?. Waverly some-thing mysterious too. Lets see where it goes.
DeanGirl4ever12 chapter 2 . 6/8/2016
I love this story so far! Please update soon! :)
suzieq1331 chapter 2 . 6/5/2016
Oh my gosh! That was worth the wait. I love this! Great job!
Chloee0x0 chapter 2 . 6/5/2016
Aw shit! Gaby's a serial killer?! Did not see that coming
painted-dawn chapter 2 . 6/5/2016
I love the modern setting and the story is very gripping and intriguing so far. I hope you update soon; can't wait to see what happens next!
AGENT Kuma-chan chapter 1 . 5/22/2016
ohhh, nice and intriguing, especially the end. I like the detail of him losing grasp over english-even slipping back into Russian. You can tell just how badly he's being affected by how clipped his sentences are getting. :)
Chloee0x0 chapter 1 . 5/1/2016
Awwwww shit!
DEUG728 chapter 1 . 4/29/2016
I really hope you'll continue this! It's a really great start. I love your writing style and voice. It's a very intriguing AU. I really want to see where this goes!
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