Reviews for In the Shadow of a Perfect Life
my 2 guys chapter 2 . 3/3/2019
that was good keep the chapters coming
Elements1999 chapter 2 . 10/29/2016
Awesome story so far. I LOVE IT!
Duke of Blades chapter 2 . 5/6/2016
Oh man, Diehauser Mito make it so Naruto can change the past. Possible her past. Stop her marriage and all. That would be insane, like how did she put space and time manipulation into the seals and on Naruto? And could he place seals like that on gloves/cloths/armor and control elements how he does with his space and time?
SPark681 chapter 2 . 5/3/2016
So Naruto is jumping through time and he doesn't even realize it wonder how this will play out anyways keep up the great work!
Dragon and Sword Master chapter 2 . 5/3/2016
Interesting little chapter here...quite curious as to what else you have in store for Naruto and his powers over time and space, though it seems like something changed in him because of those seals...just what it is I'm quite curious to find out.

Also I noticed a few words here and there where you forgot to place a letter, for example lot instead of lost. There are more but that's the one I remember the most just after reading the chapter. Thought I'd give you a heads up about that.

DASM
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UnsanMusho chapter 2 . 5/3/2016
So I'm guessing that Mito is actually Mito uzumaki the wife of the 1st hokage who went back in time with something to do with the seal on Naruto right? Does that mean this will be a Naruto/Mito fic? And it's nice to see Sakura not being a fangirl in this fic.
Kaizer Daozang chapter 2 . 5/2/2016
An amazing chapter and I got the references to when marine was there with the younger mito and a younger Konoha being shown with the two faces instead of the four and how like Marnie, Mito is the grandmother of the children and they don't realize it's her. Anyways when marine was there was a great movie and this chapter was great and fun to read.
evans16 chapter 2 . 5/2/2016
great chapter!
I expect the next soon
Dragon and Sword Master chapter 1 . 4/28/2016
I like where this is going and feel bad for both genders when it comes to both Sasuke and Ino *shakes head*
DeadlyPrincess17 chapter 1 . 4/28/2016
Hi!

Okay, this story is AMAZING. The plot is hella fucking good! I love the way you portrayed the characters so uniquely. I love how this story goes along with the original plot of the Naruto series but at the same time has this twist that makes everything else so much better than the original. I love the drizzle of RTN here, too! I love how you made them so that their abilities are above average ah! I also love the relationship between the three and as a big big big fan of SasuIno, their cute little arguments just made me love this story even more. Ahh, I love this story!

Right, now the details in this story are so precise and it has this aura that makes it so endearing to read. The characters were portrayed very well and oh god I love this plot more that I love the original plot. The story plot is just so gorgeously made and the idea of playing with the character's attitude and ability is very refreshing to read too.

Hm, now about Naruto's pairing. I'm hinting NaruIno here but it's also hinting SasuIno too! A love triangle perhaps? I wonder how that works out in the later chapters, yeah? I really can't help you pick out a pair for Naruto because I'm bias and I love Ino too much, my opinion would be solely based on her HAHA!

If I haven't said it enough, this story is stunning. It's AMAAAAZING! The plot, the details, the characters, the twists- EVERYTHING about this story is beautifully made.

You're a very amazing author. Hoping for more updates :)

Virtual hugs and kisses,
Maggie xx
SPark681 chapter 1 . 4/28/2016
Well this should be good wonder who will be paired with Naruto anyways keep up the great work!
Kenchi Narukami chapter 1 . 4/27/2016
Playboy Sasuke. Anko trained, Sado Ino, Mysterious Naruto? Looks like one hell of a ride! Im all in! More!
Elements1999 chapter 1 . 4/27/2016
Awesome story so far. I LOVE IT!
sweetlilly90 chapter 1 . 4/27/2016
I like the twist that Naruto grew up with his parents he just want to surpass his dad instead of being alone. Kakashi being their teacher and is going to take their training seriously is a good thing they will improve and be a deadly team like he said. I love the team and is looking forward to the adventures they will go on and everything else. Ino taking her training seriously and being trained by Anko makes me happy at least she can hold her own on the team. Like her skill set of wood release, posion, her clan techniques and working on her own style. Sasuke is being portrayed different but I like it, it's funny when he and Ino gets into it. Itachi helping Sasuke and not ignoring him is good since he helped Sasuke improve and they have a bond. Sasuke already having his sharingan is a plus. I also like the combo attacks between Naruto and Sasuke. Naruto accident was interesting he will definitely learn how to fully control it time/space seals will come in handy. So Naruto has sibling I wonder how many and it's sad that the Hokage can't help his own children train. At least he wants Naruto to surpass him since he is aware of Naruto not wanting to be in his shadow. All in all the first chapter is good I know I said like alot just means I liked many different things in this chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter.
UnsanMusho chapter 1 . 4/27/2016
Interesting so Naruto is trying to get out of being in the shadow of his parents huh? But I'm wondering what you meant when you said "BOTH" of Minato and Kushina's children? I mean does Naruto have siblings? If so where are they and Kushina for that matter? It's nice to see Sasuke not being a dick and Ino being a serious student (where's Sakura btw?), though I wonder how on earth did she get the Mokuton? Isn't that a Senju bloodline or something? Anyways I'm also curious to see who will get paired with who, I would like Ino to be with Naruto or someone else lie maybe Sakura or even Tenten. Anyways I look forward to seeing that you do with this plot line.
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