I had a great time reading this. I really like to dig in stories which plot is so creative and away from canon while still in the Naruto universe. I'd love to see it rewritten as well. Lots of inspiration for you two and good luck with everything that's been happening. I hope everything turns out smoothly.

Woooooooooow... I really appreciate when writers take the time to think through interesting aspects of the series and exploit them and make them their own. This kind of experiment and medical ninjutsu are great things to talk about and it barely happens in canon.

I wouldn't mind a more serious take on it. then again i'm a lover of darkfics so X3 the darker the better

I just found this story oh, and I really like it. I feel like a rewrite a with the Uchiha Massacre would give Sasuke more depth and it would make it a little more angsty.
Im not sure what you have in mind, but i feel like the relationship with Sakura wouldn't really happen, and if it did it would be very different, because he would be so focused on Revenge and he wouldn't let anything get in his way of that. I do very much think that the story is worth continuing though.

Personally I like some of the deeper and gritty bits of the story as it real builds the characters personalities and backgrounds. Also, sorry your going through a rough patch. Wishing you tons of support and good health!

I love your stories in general you can always do both with a different plot of the story

我很抱歉听到这个消息，祝你可以顺利度过这段日子。期待常春藤。

hope everything gets better in your personal life.
as for the story, I love it, but if you feel you can add improvement to the story, go for it. lol we are your humble fans after all.
I do enjoy the kimimaro and sakura relationship of this story. so if you do rewrite, I'm looking forward to seeing if you'll change that up.

Si! A mi me gustaría que siguieras escribiendo la historia, la única sugerencia que tengo es que trates de que Sakura empiece a desarrollar madurez lentamente, solo eso

Espero que estés muy bien. Y todo te este saliendo bien
Saludos desde mex

I hope Sakura joins team 7.

Por favor siguela, esta bonita, muy interesante la trama
No la abandones

Hope to read more soon!

I love Kimimaro and believe he deserves more love from us.

This story is amazing! I really hope you guys continue this! I'd love to find out what happens next especially since Sasuke and Kaguya never noticed the snake that snuck into Sakura's clothes. And then there's still Kabuto out there doing who knows what. Again I hope you two decide to continue and update this!

:)