Lol It was about time someone put that asshole Reve in his place XD

"Reve was really tired of Kagura sassing him whenever she could" Kagura is doing god's work I see

i probably should have started with the earlier sets in this series...but i started with this one.

after awhile, I'm sitting here and going "where do i recongize these names?" (Ie Lambda, Emmerauld and Protos Heis) and then looked at my game shelf and went "Tales of Graces" XD poor Lucy, as if Richard didn't have it bad enough in the game...

Reve needs a brutal loss to shut him up once and for all.

Did Lucy really have to lose again to Luke.

For the love of god I'm hoping for Reve to lose at a competition in a devastating way just to teach his cocky ass a lesson.

WHY am I not surprised.

I'm sensing a battle to the death between Natsu (E.N.D.) and Lucy (Virus) sometime in the future. Don't get those to often between love interest (if that is what you are going for).

So it seems the identity of the Scientist that infected Lucy has been revealed.

Seriously. Does White Eclipse need to win at everything? Couldn't Lucy finally get a win over Luke.

Hey it’s been awhile since I looked at this story and I now realise why. As constructive criticism, the story has become to overpopulated with ocs to the point where it could be considered a fictionpress work(oc based story) theres also the fact that the white robed individuals are clearly based off of the organisation XIII in kh. There’s nothing wrong with using similar designs, but plainly copying them with minor changes to the personality and name isn’t the best look from a kh fans perspective...but overall the story has so much potential, if u can just tone it down a bit with the ocs, if u a fan of kingdom hearts, try writing a fanfic about it instead of basically copying it. I admire your tenacity, but just keep my opinion in mind if u like :)

I'm pretty far behind I've got a long way to go. But that's fine. I can't believe Jenny took over that robot dragon that Cynthia's crazy dad made! And some one was trying tried to assassinate the queen! (Was it who I think it was?!) I'm kinda salty they didn't succeed. That lady's way too much trouble! She not even the queen! She's just hijacking the throne!

Where is White Eclipse ? I love them.
It is true u have too many oc now but they are amazing The WE's.

Really a draw...that's bullshit! Your OC's are a bunch of Mary Sue's asspullers. The whole setup is crap.

Um that Doom marine 54 guy gave a shitty review.
Anyway I'll be honest, too many OC's can't keep up with the story cause of them. Can't relate to any of them to be able to get into the story itself. Don't understand why you add a new member to team Natsu if she's considered one...I'm talking bout Cynthia she annoys me.