I just re-read all of this. Damn. I forgot about this chapter. JFC woman, I know you don't like dark but you wrote this so freaking well.

I loved it. Reading about the boys and Tucker's react was heartbreaking. But it was good.

Loved it I can imagine this happening. Your writing is spot on for imagining canon life. Please please update with more writing soon

Wow, your fics are incredible. This was so great! Even though it was a little darker than your others, you do such a good job with still showing the loving side to tucksonoah! I cannot wait to read more from you :D

Noah making stuff for Ed for Father's Day?! Ugh melted my heart..

The Tucker plot in this chapter was fantastic. I can definitely see him encountering some people in HN that may still hold a grudge against him. It proved that life is too short and precious to hold on to petty grudges... I loved that Olivia was Ed's rock in this instance and how much they support each other... Looking forward to the next chapter and don't be afraid to lean on the darkside in a future chapter or story. Keep up the good work!

It was very well done! Great job! P.S. I passed my exam, thanks for giving me a chapter to come home to!

WHAT THE ACTUAL EFF DID YOU JUST WRITE? (sobs) but IT WAS SO EFFING GOOD & WELL WRITTEN & I KINDA HATE CAPLOCKS BUT I NEED TO EXPLAIN TO YOU HOW EFFING MUCH I ACTUALLY LOVED THIS HEART-WRENCHING CHAPTER BECAUSE IT WAS SO EFFING PERFECTLY WRITTEN AND UGH. (clearly my emotions are at a high point right now but DAMNIT that was SO good.) I know you don't usually write stuff like this, and trust me I ADORE your tuckson fluff, but this was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO freaking good.

Okay, you're crazy, because I loved this. We're used to seeing Liv vulnerable, but I have to say I really enjoyed the turning of the tables in this... The action parts of this were really well-written, and I loved Liv taking the role of the comforter, and you highlighting that it's normally the other way around. I won't even get into the whole Daddy thing, because that and Tucker tears totally made ME teary. Beautifully done - even if you don't like it or don't like writing it. The world is a balance of light and dark - you do both so well :)

Noah called Tucker "Daddy". i love it!

You did a great job , I don't know what you were worried about. Tough subject... Thats enough darkness back to fluff

Fantastic job can't wait to read more

Thankfully Ed has Liv and Noah. He transferred out of IAB so that he would have an easier life, and it turned out to be a nightmare. Think Ed is going to leave the police department. This has been a tough year for him.

Noah's Fathers Day gift of the key ring and calling him daddy was the best gift of all.

A very heart rending story.

You say you don't like writing stuff like this but you sure are good at it! Had me almost in tears at one point. Great job and cant wait for more chapters from you :)

Sweet

Great