NOOOOO you abused zenyuki how could you...I'm leaving this story I am literally about to throw up right now.

hi, i just found your story and its going good so far. I wanted to ask if you knew what shirayukis birthday is, if your sleep right now im sorry if i woke you

When you say that you hate making love, it seems like you did have sex before.

Best story ever

I find that this jumps around a bit it's still good but can be a little annoying

You got me hooked so far!... Onto the next chapter!...

This was really really good

OMG! I'm so sorry i didn't see that there were more chapters. Sooooo sorrry.

i dont know if i am going mad because i thought i read your story where zen takes her back and fights with izana who says that if zen won in a sword fight he would allow shirayuki to stay. either i am mad or that 22nd or 23rd chapter got erased.:(

Wanna cry please continue! Actually I think I must have read this story for hundreds of times, ema you're great.. please make more stories and post it soon. And yes, zen and shirayuki should get one more chapter to express themselves. See you. ;-)
Aira Harune

OMG, great chapter that leads to a beautiful finish in the story. but are they married O.O and please continue to write more stories. I love your story. I made me want to read and wait for the next chapter patiently.

kawaii! lovely...

Of course he is! And he better stop those crazy pranks of his, except the one from the manga that he left both of them to sleep on the same room. Hilarious!
SHIRAYUKIxZEN forever!

Omg that is so good. Please update

Yaaaaaaaayyyy! I'm so happppyyyyy.