idk if I'm enjoying this as much. you killed naru off.

I’m not sure I’m enjoying this story as much thus far. Naruto is such a creature of determination and strength, I feel as though those aren’t shining thorough in this story, but maybe I’ll like it better as I go.

yo.. I'm crying

pd

Oh nooooo! Naru is dead?! And he killed the hatake clan? Poor madara and jiraiya. They're going to suffer so much. Naru was with child too. :(

What the hell happened at the end?!

For some reason, I feel like Mito is going to try and take Kyuubi, and will be the reason for history going the way it did. Considering history is written by the victors. It would look much better for if 'Madara went crazy randomly and tried to use the kyuubi to destroy Konoha.' Instead of: Mito ripped the nine-tails out of Madara's wife in a bid for power, and when he wanted revenge Hashirama stepped in to stop his friend from killing his wife.

What the hell is Mito's problem?! She's annoying!

Mito kind of creeps me out...

I could sense Mito's jealousy. although I love it, i feel theres something brimming in her. I feel as tho shes still mad that she hadn't gotten a true alpha, and has to make due with Hashi. When Naru has it all it seems. Loved this new Chapter. muahhh

What an honor to Jiraiya. First I thought the sarutobi had attacked him in his pregnant state, until I read clearer. good chapter as always~

They're good to have a baby! I love how naru broke the news! And to think mito found out so quickly too.

So Mito acts strange around him because she feels Kyubi's chakra?

I'm still mad you killed Kou, but I love this story.

During an attack Hashirama didn't use his Mokuton to help but he used it to rebuild a door earlier?