WTF this story was going great until you brought in this deranged weird guy that sounds like some kind of freaking demon why couldn't it have just been a happy ending well they both were they all survived and they all live happily ever after

Good story! Hope there's more added to this in the future as Ash ends up in other legendary scenarios!

flare blitz, eruption, and blast burn

It’s ok in the story department but it’s the grammar where their is spacing and breaks at awkward points that makes it hard to read. This means that English isn’t the authors first language and I’m not holding that against him/her since it’s understandable.

OK. I want ash to catch Mewtwo in the main series. Also, please reveal his ancestry soon!

Make one with Latias x ash

Loved the special but can please continue the original story

A good start to the movie adaptations though I wonder how the others will work out, aside from "Mewtwo Returns" that is. Please tell me you plan to continue this series.

You are amazing at writing but it is anoying how you left it on a clif hanger. Please write some more soon.

Love the story and everything but I only have one problem (even tho I think I know why she did( why didn't mewtwo ask ash if he wanted to remember her ? She said she was going to ask ?

pls continue other Different tale of Ash Ketchum and lemons in it

Sorry for taking a while to review this.

SO happy to read the ending, and WHAT and ending it was! Loved the scene between Ash and Mewtwo, and how she was shy at first, but opened up, and how Ash opened her up to being loved, and loving others. Also loved the bit at the end with Des. That was cute and funny!

I eagerly look forward to reading more Pokemon Specials from you.

Lastly, I have a suggestion for Ash's return to Pallet town, and when the girls meet his Mom:
Ash is contacted by Prof. Oak as they are getting ready to leave Cinnabar Island. Oak tells Ash is mother is very sick. They come as quick as they can.
Ash's Mom is in the hospital, and very ill. She's in the intensive care ward.
The whole chapter is more about the characters and their relationships, and in particular, with Ash. But, the one thing that sets this apart is this:
Ash goes out alone. For whatever reason, Blaziken is out as well. She is shcoked when she finds Ash, alone at night, crying. She never has seen him like this. In his anguish, he tells her to just leave him alone.
While she has disliked him, to see her normally happy and cheery trainer like THIS.
It HURTS. She sees another living being in pain, close to losing someone he's close to, and terrified, lost and alone. She hardly thinks before she gently picks him up and holds him. She holds him close and lets him cry, and know she's there.
The other girls, worried, came out to find her, and join in a tender group hug, showing him they ALL are there for him, no matter what.
The next day, Ash's Mom recovers. When they see Ash so happily hug her, Nidoqueen says calmly and warmly:
"All men were once boys. And ALL little boys lover their mothers..."
Thus, Mrs. Ketchum meets all of the girls in person for the first time, and she knows her son is in the safest of hands...

I hope that gives you a general idea to use. Then, after that, you can have a happy return home, some normal home life, and then the reveal about Ash's heritage.

Finally got around to reading this. It was great, but I didn't notice I wasn't even 'following' this one so that is why it took so long lol

What a wonderful end to a fabulous story! Worth the wait!
I liked how Mewtwo was shy, but also a bit nervous, but found what she liked. Ash seemed perfectly in character.

I had an idea for something to do with Mewtwo later on: Instead of her being a villain, she becomes the hero, and when some humans are threatened by Tey or someone else, SHE is the one who answers the call. Ash showed her to judge each person by their own character and actions, not age, gender, religion or color.
I can see her shocked when little children hug her legs, and others look at her like a savior.
People CAN change, if they want. It's never easy, but if your desire it strong, you can do it. She proves that very well.
I could see her looking at a burned village, thinking how she almost did the same, and thinks "I'll NEVER be on the wrong side again..."
I could see the rest of the clones helping as well.

This was WONDERFUL! So happy to finally read the ending of this first special!

Glad my suggestions could help give you ideas.
I liked how shy Mewtwo was. It was very cute. I also loved how Blaziken was angry at her clone coming onto Ash. LOL
I thought Ash and Mewtwo's intimate scene was very well done, and while hot and heavy, was also romantic, and had tenderness to it.
I also liked the fact that Ash showed her what it means to love.
"I want to know what Love is. I know you can show me."
The fact Mewtwo was a tiny bit kinky was also fun and funny.;)

The ending, with Des warning them about Danger to Ash is great, leaving things open for more, later on!
Folks, this story is far from done. All the Pokemon movies go in here, and maybe a few original specials as well! This isn't complete!
Looking forward to more of this, and the main story!