Can't believe that Meldy is the spy... She better not be it...

Also to the person who said Brandish should not have been able to beat Jellal, first of all Jellal was not focused on her, he was trying to kill her daughter so he was distracted thus allowing her to overpower him. Not to mention he also took damage from Erza. Plus this is Fairy Tail the power of family saves them more times then I can even count. An example is Natsu was not stronger than Zero or even Jellal but he was still able to defeat them.

To the person who was complaining how Natsu chose Brandish over Lucy. Clearly you didn’t read the entire story, Mira said that he asked her out once and got rejected. Plus if you are going to say its just because of years of friendship Mira or Erza would have been a better choice. Besides if he would have chose Lucy their child would have died because she would have been unable to protect it. Also if you were looking for a nalu fic why read this one?

This was a good story, I enjoyed it but poor Erza. No one should have to go through that.

This was really fucking good

The defeat of jellyman by randi is canonically impossible considering natsu, laxus and him are high spriggan tier while randi is mid to low only thing going for her is her hax magic

It's amazing how many people are salty over Lucy being the most popular Fairy tail character in the reviews

Crackfics crack me up like oocness was off the charts literally. I mean who would throw away years of friendship over an obsessed chick. But anyways it's fanfiction and the idea is kinda unique

Pretty sure Zeref said Spriggan means ugly Fairy. What a terrible name for a child.

Hmmm I think you could have wrapprd things up a bit more... but a very good story non-the-less

Not a bad read. I liked the idea of natsu having to make decisions as a team leader. I am kinda confused why you bothered to put the part of natsu and brandish's son in since it just seemed so out of place as an ending. The fight between jellal and erza was excellent and the way brandish protected her baby was perfect.

Well, Lucy, you got some big competition now.

He loves Brandish more than he loves his child? no one would ever say that especially not the parent of a new born.

Still a good read though

Damn, didn't expect it when started to read this chapter.
Brandish did to Jellal, the same thing that Dimaria pointed she could have done to Lucy if she really wanted to kill her in their fight, if we can call it a fight.
It was pretty epic of Brandish how she killed the bastard who ruined many lives.

Hmmm, so Natsu and Brandish had another baby, but a boy this time and apparently Erza stay living with then, after all this time, though Erza was going to be with Natsu and have a child between then.

Poor Natsu he can't get a free moment on his life.

Sad to know this story ended but it was a very good story to read and enjoy.

Awesome story this one was.

This was a good chapter.
Something bad always happen when Natsu take long to arrive at his house, now the blue haired bastards is back again to kill Brandish, her baby and Erza always, when Natsu arrive he will burn Jellal butt to nothing but ashes..

Now to the next chapter.