LOVED IT SO MUCH!

Last part had me laughing and crying at the same time.

ha! I really enjoyed this! short sweet and lovely.

Loved you Gray and Natsu characterisations and how you handled things.

Omg when Natsu said You Know What in ch1, my heart broke... being queer, but having Natsu as my favorite character, it hurt (but in an ok way, don't worry, I know it was supposed to hurt for the sake of the story!). I cried happy tears at the end, haha guess it's official, I'm a puddle when it comes to good Gratsu fics. This is definitely one of my top favorites I've read.

I love what Natsu says about communicating! Damn right. He's not as emotionally stunted as people think. :) Also perfect ending! Heehee!

Oh and this - "Call me old fashioned, but I don't have sex with people who are unconscious." THANK YOU. I liked that not only was there good consent throughout, but Natsu makes a joke about it like it's impossible anyone would actually fuck a drunk person. Made me happy :)

Keep writing!

I liked the story a lot. It's different than the usual seme/uke stuff we're used to read.
And I have to say, I prefer it this way a lot more.
I got a feeling that Gray was more 'feminine' in this story which irked me a bit. But how you portray the characters is entirely up to you.

Natsu and Gray were a bit out of character (their relationship not included). I just found it hard to picture Gray blushing so hard he even needs to hide behind Natsu. And there was some poor word choices when Natsu spoke, like "Oh dear god," or whatever :D
I like it when things are kept inside FT universe, it doesn't break your focus off the story.

If you ask me, it felt like reading AU story with less than 10 scenes. But that doesn't change the fact that I really enjoyed the story. 1

Constructive WOOOHOOO!

love it

I really loved this novel!

Ha, 'homophobic pricks'. Very nice way of phrasing that. XD But yes, that's true.

LOL poor gray but LOL

yeah okay they are confused rn and all but WTF NATSU NO GRAY HAND GOOD HAND DON'T DROP IT WHAT STFU

Coolw

I love this already! Can't wait for the update.

Yeah! You made a new fic XD
Amazing work as always. I like the idea of Natsu's harsh words hurting Gray.
Thank you and see you next chapter!

I love all the scene that takes place in the guild hall. also papa!Gildarts is the strawberry in the cake there :)

For me overall this is a great story. Some sentences are quite a mouthful to read and there are a few words that I'm not familiar with (as a non english speaker) which decrease the enjoyment a bit. And the pace from friend to lover is a little too fast for my liking.

Amazing as always *-*
Natsu lol he hurt gray af tho with the blood and all *sigh*
the little scene at the guild was hot too :3