A great story. That is what this is. Even though it has some problems, it's good enough to ignore them. I have really enjoyed binge reading this. It's stories like this that keep giving me faith that there are more good stories out there. I would ask that you do come back to this. But I won't push you to, I just want to say that for the first fan-fic you have written, it is damn good and I really want to see where the story goes. But ONLY, if you want to.

Cheers for the story, it was fun, and I will return.

chauchat. the worst gun ever made

Also can you create that one rwby stroy you have plan what was it it was I believe called lord of cordials

Hey bro I know your chooseing to end this story but there is one story there at the bottom sitting there collecting dust it’s good it’s fantastic it’s unique up now it’s at the bottom there not updated please update that poor story it’s too good to just abandon it so please update it that’s what I’m asking please can you ?

...Hm. Okay.

I understand this fic does have issues, namely consistency (Promethean weapons) and open-ended plot lines (Red Razors). So go ahead, I would love to see the fic that got me into fanfiction get a much-deserved do-over.

Now for what I would like to see...

1. Please get the Promethean weapons right. Sorry, just something that kept on nagging me.

2. Have mary use Half Swording (look it up, it's awesome).

3. Please have Team JAGR get accidental tossed into Installation 00 and the SPIRIT OF FIRE!

4. If you are adding the Brothers (assholes, pardon) then could make them immature Precursors that had to watch there race either get slaughtered, put in stasis or turn to dust ( hint hint nudge nudge). That would make a lot of sense. It would also make the precursors a race of Intergalactic, Eldritch, Shapeshifting Alien Space Wizards.

It's been a truly batshit insane ride with this story, I'll be sure to check out deluge when it goes up

I'm sad your ending this story, i quite enjoyed it, still, i will gladly read your story about a flood crossbreed lady, it sounds like a nice idea

It indeed was good ride while it lasted. And I hope you enjoyed writing this as much as I have enjoyed reading it.

Sad to read it go, but looking forward to the redo!

well hope the rewrite if any will come will do well

here i thought you were dead

Well I will be looking forward to reading the rewrite of this fanfic

When do you plan on releasing chapter 17?, also love the story keep up the good work

This story is really good. I hope you update this story when you can.

You know i'm kinda hoping for Cortana or Warden Eternal to show up into this fic. Mostly because 1. Cortana now has control over most of the Orion Arm at this point and Warden Eternal technically is the guardian of the Domain so it only makes sense that they would stumble onto Remnant and may see John and Remnant as valuable asset. 2. I just want to see how John or the Remnant reacts to Cortana and the rest of the Created.
But anyways good job so far and keep up the good work!