| Reviews for Rewrite the History Books |
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GhostDT chapter 7 . 1/24 This is like a shorter version of Relic of the future. Just with a more attractive, younger, and from the looks of it, stronger Jaune. |
RenegadeForLife chapter 10 . 10/27/2019 This was a great story. Shame it's probably not going to update again. I know that last bit was an omake but I'm just going to see it as part of the story. Ruby eventually masters her maiden powers to the point where she can bring Jaune back to the future. Maybe she even becomes able to move them both between the two timelines freely so they can visit their younger selves. Seems like the happiest ending he could get at this point. Unless she actually becomes a godlike being and pulls a DBZ to bring all their friends back to life as well. |
I P chapter 5 . 10/8/2019 I like how this orbits around both genders , than just op women |
stylo1 chapter 1 . 8/14/2019 so you get beat up locked up without due cause and then offered a job, well ofc you accept |
stylo1 chapter 1 . 8/14/2019 heh taking maidenhood, dont think you realise how wrong this is. maiden of the summer ergo summermaiden. maidenhood is about virginity |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2019 I don't know about anyone else, but I come back to this fic on occasion in hopes of an update. |
aaaaa chapter 4 . 2/20/2019 Jaunewhatareyoudoingyou'llmesseverythingupprobably |
Guest chapter 10 . 9/2/2018 If ruby did come back as well all threats would be much more trivial. Besides of course the issue that joan is now engaged to another woman. |
Duder chapter 10 . 5/30/2018 This is a great story, my only critique after reading it for the third time is: you REALLY need to go over past chapters in regards to how you refer to the world. You keep using the phrase 'the entire Remnant,' 'the whole Remnant' or 'the Remnant,' that just doesn't work. You could more coherently use phrases like 'the entire world,' 'the whole planet,' 'the ENTIRETY of Remnant' or 'all of Remnant,'. Any one of these could EASILY replace nearly all instances of the phrase and make the story flow that much more easily. |
Qihao56 chapter 10 . 5/30/2018 Inb4 ruby “accidentally” teleports back to the past and finds Jaune Would be absolutely hilarious to watch ruby meet ruby and becoming jealous of winter... |
Zeroclearance chapter 10 . 5/16/2018 Ruby with infinite power I don't know whether to be scared or laugh at what might come |
DeadParade chapter 10 . 5/2/2018 OMG ruby with infinite power... that just spells trouble |
comfyinsunshine chapter 1 . 4/21/2018 Please continue! Love where this is going. |
Artyom-Dreizehn chapter 10 . 4/13/2018 So in the future Ruby will come help jaune?... Oh, this is but an omake, what a bum. |
Artyom-Dreizehn chapter 8 . 4/13/2018 Hannibal from God Eater lol |