Aw, so perfect! I loved the “almost forgot” bit! Adorable!

This is really good, and I can't wait to see the comic you're making for it. Awesome, and good luck!

It's amazing how this wonderful fic has sooooo many notes on Tumblr... and barely any reception on here, comparatively! I read this on Tumblr earlier today, and am so glad I found its counterpart here! I shall never EVER tire of "almost kiss" alternative fics! As my tags said on my blog: THIS IS THE NEW CANON. NO ONE CAN TELL ME OTHERWISE. XD Absolutely adorable, heartwarming fic! It needs WAY more reviews and favorites on here, dammit!

beautiful

I love this story! It's so sweet! I wish it would have happened like this!

Wonderful! 3

YES! YES YES YES YES YES YES! *fistpumping* This is EXACTLY what needed to happen in the anime!
AHMERGASH when Sōta barged in I was just like "I'M GOING TO WRING YOUR SCRAWNY NECK YOU NO-GOOD LITTLE BRAT! HOW DARE YOU INTERRUPT THE MOMENT!?"
This was absolutely PERFECT. Well done! *standing ovation*

i loved it! he best one shot ever i hope you keep writing cause you write lovely

I love it! I think you did an amazing job telling it.

that was intense and such a sweet ending :)

I wish I'd seen this on the anime! It really is a lot how I imagined, passionate but sort of innocent and sweet too, I mean... It would be their very first time actually, so I think you did a pretty good job in here.

Cute :)

Wish this is how the show would have proceeded! (sigh) Don't those animators know we waited YEARS for a good solid kiss from those two?! Great ficlet! :3