Omg this was such a great story

Beautiful

Just a question. Did you write a story where Seth either dreams of changing the past or travels in time? To right what went wrong? It seemed like maybe Seth had done so in Chapter 10 where he was watching Roman in the mirror? Please?

I love these 'timeline' stories!

i binged this entire fic tonight and it is one of the best on this site. great job

Awesome ending to this. Yep, some things have to play out as they are because other things will come in the future. Nicely done on this. The dialogue was from Captain's story What Is And What Should Never Be.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

HAHAHA! What is and what should never be. Sad to see this end but it was amazing! It pulled at all the feels, delivered so many interesting moments. Keep building and building until a natural conclusion. Absolutely loved every moment of this rollercoaster ride!

Ferris Bueller!

You made me cry with the graveyard part. Marty's story was so sad but it makes sense. I love love love the future reunion scene. It's awesome! That future meeting with Marty was beautiful and I'm curious about the mirror part.

First off, I like how ended the last chapter with him not traveling. It really sets it apart from the others where Roman was in control. It really shows how different his mental state is compared to the rest of the story. And second, the ending! You killed them all! Omg!

Lol. Ramen... And holy hell, Roman lost his shit. Like completely lost his shit. I can't believe Roman beat them. I get it though- he just lost control of his emotions but still, holy hell.

Holy shit, I don't know where to start. Seth's future sucks. I can't imagine how it feels to lose what you love the most. I do like the idea of Seth owning his own dairy farm. And Dean. omg. I can't believe he tried to kill Roman. That hospital scene was so heavy and depressing. It scared me. I thought he was going to actually kill Roman. Wow... I wonder how this will impact Roman.

That's such a forboding ending. Poor Roman, the man really has no clue. I love the chapter title and how you used the line in the chapter. Nice job

The dialogue bit is from Ferris Bueller's day off and did Dean go on a little time travel adventure himself?

I really like how you used onomatopoeia in here. And I can't believe you melted Roman. That got way dark in a hurry. Awesome though.

Wow, I bet Rome wasn't expecting that outcome. Dean was adorable in here, a cute crazy? Lol.