Amazing ending! Yeah, that was shock therapy for Sam but it worked. And Dean slapping Sam for Impala...oh yeah it had it coming.

My heart broke when Dean woke up and asked for John but John was already gone. Luckily that boys are getting better I mean their health because if it's going about their relationship it's more complicated. And Bobby found something about that curse.

No wonder that Dean was so broken besides what's going with Sam, John and Missouri's travel to Dean's mind showed that painfully how much guilt Dean is carrying and how much this destroying him. Luckily it's seems like John ripped him out of this dark, fever dream.
It's good that Sam came over too but this black goo...this doesn't sound good.

It's good that they're at Missouri's. They will get help, I'm sure of that. I'm can't wait when Bobby will figure out how to cast away this demon from Sam. John's travel to Dean's head remind me episode of Supernatural called "Dream A Little Dream of Me".

Wow! That was amazing chapter! Dean's hallucinations broke my heart and his meeting with dad. He couldn't believe that is really him and the way John cought him before Dean fell. I knew that he couldn't hide from his boys when he saw that Dean's hurting.
I guess Sam is more susceptible on monster's influence because of he lost Jess?

"Can this get any worse?yeah, with Winchesters bad luck it can be much worse.
Holy moly! That monster who's cursing Sam was terrifying but simultaneously you wrote that amazingly. I had goosebumps!
Please, someone help Dean!

It's going worse and worse with Sam. With Dean too, this infection must be killing him!
Poor Impala.

It's comforting thay Dean and Sam finally talked to each other. Man, the way how Dean is flinching over Sam's yell is so sad! Panic attack plus growing infection isn't good set. Hex bag sounds reliable but after John's and Missouri talk it's sounds like that it's something relevant to Sam's "destiny". Thanks to bring Missouri because I liked her! And it was Bobby on the like?

Oh Geez! This attack on Dean terrified me so much. They tried to rape him?! What a sick SOB! Again we have flash of concious showing at Sam's.

Things were started to move in good direction because both brothers were thinking that something is wrong and that they should reach for each other before it will be too late. And suddenly BAM! Sam gone to dark side again!

Thiss old lady was so sweet! Sam creeping me out, seriously. It's feels like he has't fully control over himself.

Wow, I'm totally interested in this story! Brothers have bad days sometimes but Sam's behavior scaring me so much. What happened to him?! I wanna hug Dean right.

Well, I wasn't expecting John to be in this story at all, but it's a nice surprise. It also makes sense, since Home wasn't too long before this. Knowing exactly where you are in the aired episodes lets you do some cool foreshadowing, too. I love that you can identify Bobby by the words "gruff voice." Meanwhile, the boys are getting a piece of the puzzle. Even tho Dean still feels like crap, he's relieved that he's not the cause of Sam's anger, that there's an outside supernatural influence involved. Now Sam needs to realize that Dean's been taking an awfully long shower...

Well, since you wrote 3 & 4 together, I decided to comment on them together. What in tarnation is wrong with Sam? I knew that when he left the bar, there was going to be a bar brawl with Dean getting the worst of it, but, wow, poor Dean really got clobbered! And then lost and soaked. I hate to think of him pounding on the motel room door and Sam inside, ignoring him, even when he was practically begging to be let in. Glad he thought of the laundry room and I can understand why he cringed away from Sam and made a beeline for the bathroom the next morning. Sam seems to finally be getting some remorse, I hope that leads somewhere in the next chapter.

Oh, poor Dean. I thought surely Sam would see that his brother was hurting when he saw him still completely dressed and crashed on the bed, but nooooo... I liked Sam's comment about Dean taking the bed by the door, as usual, even though Sam doesn't think he needs protection any more. And Sam's finally got a glimmer of something wrong, does he still harbor some of Dr. Ellicott's evil influence from Asylum?