| Reviews for Return of the King |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 7/12 Wow this just so cliched I cant bear to read anymore. |
 AadenHelan chapter 5 . 6/14 Black attack the queen twice and the second attack they attack all three of the queen and just got a warning? Arthur musn't really teaching Harry how to be a king or Harry just went brain damage. No matter how you want to make it, attacking a royalty always mean death, and don't start that king arthur is a kind king, hell no there's no such king like that on the past eras of history |
| blackphoenix4ever chapter 1 . 6/13 great story, I like it very much, but there is something not right when you say the content of the vaults and the years that was accumulated. You say 3,000 years. That by itself is impossible and here is Why. this is late 20 century, so by taking off 3, 000 years, the vaults have started to accumulate in the 10 century before christ (BC). This is antiquity. The Arturian legends are late 5 century, early 6th century, which makes the accumulation of the vaults between 1,400 and 1,500 years. This is the only mistake that I have found. and it is not big is just there |
| Infernius chapter 2 . 6/3 So I saw someone comment about it (though he/she seems to have forgotten about the whole point) but Hua Mulan is CHINESE she is not JAPANESE. Small mistake that tickle guy like me. Otherwise pretty good story :) |
| silver.blast96 chapter 17 . 4/27 This was your one good story, and you abandon it. What a fucking idiot |
| Godless Turtle chapter 1 . 4/26 Honestly, even if he didn't get killed when he returns as Harry Potter... why would he choose anything else as the third option? King of Avalon wtf. |
| alexbarnes806 chapter 5 . 1/30 how did the get wine from 1993 in the 70's |
| Darkeros07 chapter 1 . 1/29 Please edit your description to read "Not Finished, rewriting" or something. So people don't read the whole thing just to find out it's not actually complete. I loved this story. |
| Cade2065 chapter 1 . 1/26 Lol, why would you offer a million galleon when everyone else wasn't even offering 10,000? What a dumbass, just cause you have a lot of money doesn't mean you have to be wasteful with it. Smh. |
| AA chapter 1 . 1/25 Hadrian Merlin Pendragon, King of Avalon and of all Britain, King Hadrian Merlin Pendragon, King Hadrian Merlin Pendragon, i'm King Hadrian Merlin Pendragon blablabla. (I would rather call him King Gary Stu) Too much for my, i'm out. |
| MansCC chapter 17 . 1/25 Like all rewrites there will be a few chapters and then dead |
| deadtoke14 chapter 17 . 1/25 Ok |
| BaddieDZ2 chapter 17 . 1/24 what a joke |
| Mikeblade chapter 17 . 1/24 abandoning it to rewrite it does not make this version complete please remove the complete tag |
| King Cam the 1st chapter 17 . 1/24 Nice I can't wait |
