Fuck dude. this was a fantastic story. well written, little to no grammar/spelling errors. and man, that ending was heartbreaking. I love tragedy stories, but I like ones with a more happy ending (as odd as that sounds). that's not even a criticism, that's just my personal preference. very well done!

I love this story, but at the same time I hate you so much. My precious emotions have been shattered, excellent writing

FUCK! I don't really know what I was expecting when I read this but I can tell you that it was not THAT. I did not really see Ruby's death coming, so congrats on that. This actually made me tear up. You should be proud of that. Means this story was very well written. As much as it hurt reading this, I did enjoy it. So yeah, great job writing this. It was awesome.

the sadness. the impending doom! the tears! ok, great story, really. I think I needed this

i'm sad now...this is what I get for reading angst when i'm happy
should have waited until i'm depressed

I... I don't know what to say.
Well...
First of all, the writing is amazing, Well done.
Second, you are a monster. A beautiful monster. This was a rollercoaster of emotions.
thank you.

Whoa! I knew Kosa got angry easily, but yeesh..

Anyways, I didn't particularly enjoy this, though I knew I wouldn't going in. It was well written and certainly served its purpose and was an interesting read, just not my cup o tea. Angsty death stories aren't really what I like.

Though, I'm not quite sure why you tagged this as romance as this...isn't a romance story. There's hardly any in here. Imo, angst/tragedy would've been a better choice for tags, since those are the two most prevalent genres in the story.

Fuck you bastard! And use appropriate tags while posting shit like this!

FUCK

I think angst was an understatement, like wow, you've successfully taken my heart out ripped it into tiny pieces and shoved it back into my chest. I think the parts that really got to me were, Weiss waiting on Ruby, Ruby seeing Weiss but not being able to call out or get help, and lastly Weiss realizing her feelings at the end. That just...wow. I'm actually crying.

This... This was the most beautiful, heart wrenching story I've ever read. Holy hell. Absolutely perfect.