Wow. I can’t believe I have never read this. I love how beautiful you have written KJ’s fears and how Chakotay accepts her and won’t stop loving her. That ending was a JC dream.

What a gem! Thank you!

This is a little jewel, seriously gorgeous. Not sure how you managed to blend something so humourous with something so heartfelt, but it works perfectly. And only someone like KJ would attempt to blame COMPOTE for her unwanted feeling. Such a delight, thank you. xx

Love it. Gravity didn't make her fall in love. HAHA. Great first line, and you did wonders with it!

Lovely, well developed for such a short story.

I LOVE THIS! You took us on such a journey in 1100 words or less. From flippant to pushing him away to angst ridden to finally admitting the truth, I was with Kathryn every step of the way. This is a great drabble and I really enjoyed it!

Lovely! You've made such a sweet story out of a pretty tricky first line! Wonderful work :) thank you for sharing

very beautiful!

This made me smile :) Such a lovely light-hearted, yet still romantic story. I love how you used the line you were given - 'she doesn't quite understand what he means by blaming...' Ha! Excellent tactic! Totally worked. I like Chakotay's quiet confidence at the beginning too - even the smirking ;)

Gaaaah! This was perfection! I love the line about being the fruit compotes fault!