Reviews for What a Wonderful World
redacted987 chapter 22 . 3/31/2018
Hey, just wanted to say that this is an amazing story. I really enjoyed reading it all. Thank you author!
Guest chapter 22 . 3/11/2018
I know I'm late to respond but, if this is what you feel is right then I think that the actual true fans will support your decision
SixPerfections chapter 9 . 8/13/2017
It's irritating that Ruby doesnt seem to grasp the concept of time travel... or any of the other ones for some reason... calling someone who looks your age "dad" and "uncle" is retarded.

Sigh.
Jiggly Joe chapter 12 . 7/5/2017
I know this is discontinued but you'll probably still see this.

I'd just like to point out, for futuee reference, that "Uncle" has no sge obligation, unlike "Father" and "Grandfather"

As an example, my mother is only four years younger than her uncle, also, I have an aunt that's two years younger than I am.
Hithros chapter 22 . 4/16/2017
It's a shame that your motivation/inspiration dried up for this story, but that's definitely understandable. I wish you luck on the next iteration!

I also really appreciate you giving us the outlines of your planned arcs. It's really neat to go through and see how things would play out.

So...I figured the Black Vein worked along those lines, but didn't expect JNPR to have time-jumped as well; I guess Mount Glenn still has active infestations despite the lack of regular inhabitants? That Lady Ashen isn't Cinder refutes my theory, but that's cool - I thought it would have been a little too...direct, if she was? Something like that. On the other hand, it was a complete surprise to learn that (real) Diggs and Effie were different.

I'm glad to see that Patch would have been reclaimed. And also that Taiyang and Liliana resolved things peacefully. It's particularly nice to see that the Schnee family didn't go the same way as in canon - it's fun to imagine how Crystal and Weiss' meeting went.

It's a tad disappointing (but completely reasonable) that Lanthus would use questionable methods of dealing with matters at times, and I should have figured earlier that Clay was Blake's dad - ah, well.
Guest chapter 22 . 3/31/2017
You didn't mention much of ruby...or the rest of JNR...
RebekahTPE chapter 22 . 2/20/2017
So you're creating another story with the same time-travel concept but with STRQ and RWBY being more equal?
darklegendarysoldier chapter 22 . 2/19/2017
Well if you think this story wasn't going to go anywhere who am I to judge I look forward to your next story see you around.
Skittertale chapter 22 . 2/18/2017
Awww, but I liked the dark aspects of this story, really followed with the recent iteration of RWBY. :( Oh well, Thanks for this 'fic even if it had but a brief life!
shoujochan chapter 22 . 2/18/2017
aw... I'm truly saddened by your decision,however, sharing your plot and other info about the whole story creates a closure in this story (in my opinion). I am lucky to read a wonderful story like this and I'm looking forward for your future projects
grifman275 chapter 22 . 2/17/2017
So will this newer story will be called something new, or will it be a rewrite under the same name?

Also, in this less dark new story, will there be more RWBY and STRQ fluff? Will we see Ruby tackle a teenage Summer for example?

How far off from canon will this new story be? Will it be drastically different like in this one, or will be a little bit closer, like with character names and origins?

I hope you are successful in your endeavor in making a new story and I can't wait to read it! :)
death7559 chapter 22 . 2/17/2017
Good luck mate, thanks for telling us and giving us temporary closure.
Enigma infinite chapter 22 . 2/17/2017
Good. Better to cut your loss than continue an inferior story that you don't like. Looking forward for your next work.
somas35 chapter 22 . 2/17/2017
Dang. I really enjoyed this fic. although I was noticing a lack of relevance for RWBY somewhat. maybe this is just what the story needs. in any case i'll be keeping an eye out for the reboot. (if it could be called that) PS. are you gonna delete this?
Bad Habits chapter 22 . 2/17/2017
Very sad to hear that this has been abandoned - not least which because I just found the darned thing!

Glad to hear you'll be trying something a little lighter though.
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