Bruh. I was praying in my head 'Please don't let it be Jeff, please don't let it be Jeff.' Then when it said 'lidless eyes' I was like FUcK!

...This Is Amazing, Don’t Be A Sour Skittle Though!

Interesting! I look forward to more!

Wow, this is really good! It's so much darker this time around, and there's no protection from anyone this time. You can really feel the helplessness of the situation. Nice work! I hope to see more soon!

laughing jack! EEEEEEEEEEEEEE! I LOVE HIM SO MUCH! I loved how you made the amusement park very silent hillish. your writing has gotten so much better over the years of knowing you. :D. girlie this might be your best yet!

oh my god...oh my god...im falling in love with your slender. he's so much scarier then before. less...sweet.

I love your writing style. And i really hope you update soon.

Amazing just amazing... you have done a beautiful job with the story... can't wait to read some more

Oooo I fucking love this story so interestingly gorey and magical each. Character so wicked by nature nmh very nice job. And I can't wait for the next chapter!

This is getting really good! Please update again soon!

This is great!

Amazing chapter, keep up the great writing! I look foreword to the next chapter!

AMAZING as always

As fine as ever! I like the relationship she's got going on with the Doctor. And I'm hoping we meet more Creepypasta's?

Well I think I know who the main love interest is. It's totally Sally yep 100% sure.