Great stuff! Love your work! Looking forward to more.

I can't say I understood that. Did Nito die? I hope not.

I mean I'm sorry for assuming that you would make all darks souls 3 characters weaker. That was a really good chapter

What, I can’t believe nito just bit the dust just like that...

...awwwwwwwwww I liked Nito.

huh, interesting. I see what you did with the GG.

Hm, so you are willing to kill of your characters. Interesting.

...what just happened?

Nito is dead?... ... What?

chapter 10 was good

Yesyesyesyes I waited so long for this!

But...

Waitaminute!

Did...DID NITO JUST DIE?!

Huh...I was not expecting them to win. Though I'm also not sure if they won or if they "won".

awwww...nito's dead...(deader? redead? doubledead?) shame, he was always one of the better gods in my opinion. the others were all massive pricks, while he just wanted to take a nap in his coffin

Im imagining artorias' hungry arm as an otamote (the weird music device thing)

Aw man, I was really hoping Lex would have been the one to meet with Gael. The 2 strongest members of human kind meeting and possibly fighting in a climactic showdown would have been glorious for sure.

I digress, the story has been good though I personally find it very much lacking in terms of actual plot development which hasn't really been expanded on here besides the overarching theme of Lex's "save everyone" operation and that idea suffers because its main architect and driving force is missing.

In terms of fight scenes, that's covered over and beyond but when it happens repeatedly for the majority of chapters it starts to become a bit monotonous. Eventually I found myself skipping large chunks in some chapters because while fight scenes are cool if done right, and you do them well enough, it's not as good as when the characters talked to each other. For instance the Sinner/Yhorm, Vendrick/Lothric Brothers, and Oscar/Quelaag chapters were my favorites despite the little to no combat shown. It was just more interesting listening to the characters engage each other with words and having their personalities be the focus rather than read paragraphs filled with detailed descriptions of a fight.

To that end, Lex's absence in this particular story also made me realize that, funnily enough, he's primarily the reason why the series might be as interesting as it is since he's chock-full of personality and that makes him interesting to read about.

So while reading about bosses from across the games fighting each other is enticing, when it's done so frequently it gets boring to read in comparison to the characters interacting with each other in ways that their personalities and the contrasts between them are the focus.

Overall...it's good, just not as much as the previous works of the series I believe.

Thanks for writing! Hope to see more.