I have been waiting for updates on this story since however! Hearing this really makes me happy and I hope it all turns out fine. I'm also going to look out for when the reboot shows up.

If Lowell stopped Yuto from merging with Yuya, then that means that Yuya doesn't have Dark Rebellion. I'm predicting that the Standard arc is going to end with Yuya not even being in the battle royal.

I have two names for your dark synchro. Bestia twin fang, or spectral dual partisan

You screwed up a couple of card effects, but otherwise it was pretty good. Thanks for writing this

no suggestions for featured monsters (unless you want to use Fortune Lady Divine, but she's a little overpowered, you might need to nerf her a little) however I do have a name suggestion for your new Dark Synchro monster; it's effect, for the most part is very similar to the new Red Eyes Fusion monster Archfiend Black Skull Dragon, so how about just futzing with that name a little, something like: Red Eyes Archfiend Dragon, or Black Skull Dark Synchro Dragon? Something like that (this is of course assuming you're planning on making it a dragon or fiend [you'd probably need to use the Archfiend name for that case] if your planning a warrior or spellcaster or anything of the sort, I'll have to get back to you...)

Oh. Thank you for clarifying that. Maybe Spectral Grudge Ghoul for the dark synchro monster. As for their ages, the only reason that I can think of would be anime logic.

Shouldn't Lowell's life points been cut due to intrusion penalty? Aaaaaand she used wavering eyes. I miss using that.

That was pretty unexpected, a Synchro-Pendulum so early in the story. And Luna? Don't remember hearing this name in that story anytime before...

Aaaand there is nothing else to note about the chapter...

I don't know who is in that group you mention, but if Shun is a part of it then Lowell may not be the oldest, althought we don't know Shun's age...

Also, Reiji is 16? That's some weird artstyle then, since he doesn't look to be less than 18 to me.

It seems that dealing with school is hard for everyone around here to deal with. Lucky me!

I can sympathize with Lowell, opening events and such things are SO boring. I also don't recognize most of the names you used, so are they OCs or minor characters from YGO that I don't remember?
As for the mistakes: 1) A player is allowed to normal summoned/set a monster only once per turn and Taysuke set two monsters on his first turn. You don't need to rewrite the duel for this, just have him activate a spell called Double Summon and then set the monsters ;)
2) When Sabrine's monster got destroyed her LP decreased from 4000 to 2300 LP when the damage she took was only 300 points and her LP should fall to just 3700 instead.
3) Now this I don't know how you plan to fix, but Nebula Knight Mercury has been destroyed by Snowman Eater's effect, so I don't get it how he was later tributed to power up Nebula Aurora Meteor Knight.
I also noticed that most of your mistakes are with the game ruling and not grammar, which by the way is far better and easier to fix

W-wait I didn't challenge her at a duel. T-there is no way I could actually how to be able to fight the Queen of Dragons head on! *pushes his Buster Blader deck away* She said that she has a bone to pick up with us and I said that I'm ready for anything she has in store, expect for a dragon, that would be overkill :v

I got you point there, the XYZ Arc was was really rushed and had no real purpose, like send Yuya's group to Fusion instead of XYZ and the only chance would be that you will have Shun instead of Kaito...
As for the Bracelet Girls... I don't want to spoil it but it seems that they aren't on the same side anymore... guess why :/
I guess it was expected to happen, after all it was announced that Arc-V ends next year and we still know almost nothing about the dragons and the bracelets. I believe that the need to speed up the plot now is just a result of the bad writing of the Synchro Arc... The only important things they did for the 50 or so episodes there were Yuya's second duel with Jack and Serena's kidnapping...

Once again, I found some erroes, some not important - Kazama shouted 5300 when Rise Falcon's attack raised to 8300, stupid Kazama. While others are breaking the rules - Niles used Polymerization to fuse from his Graveyard. Unless some kind of effect allows him to do it I don't see how he could pull it out. Other than that it was a pretty solid chapter and from the review I can say that only good thinks are awaiting Lowell.

Wanna come at me Tanith? I can take anything you throw at me, unless it's a dragon... Let's face it... NOBODY CAN SURVIVE AFTER GETTING SMASHED BY A DRAGON!

Also, could you explain to me why having pirates is so unlikely? For me it isn't such a big surprise because:
Do you really think that Academia isn't against the pirates? They just aren't that big of a deal as maintaining an invasion in another dimension and kidnapping the key element for the Professors' project who turns out to be in the Fusion Dimension. I believe that Academia is still trying to take them down, but due to all the events that are happening they have limited resources to use.
The same could be said about why pirates were at their peak durring the 17th century. (But please fix me if I'm wrong because I don't really know much about Pirates' history *sweatdrops*)

I would like to see a battle royale between niles, yuto, hokotu, and possibly an oc of mine. If you cant do oc, then i will pick meletta

I re-read chapter 14 so. Gudh gudh, veri gudh! (for some reason I like writing like this, lol) Dark Synchro #2's previous effect wasn't bad at all, but yeah, the new one makes things less confusing.

Chapter 15 was fascinating! Though I really didn't expect Lowell to lose which really surprised me. Of course Lowell had a bad hand and that Barinote... A male monster in an archetype of female monsters...

I want to be on his place \(T-T\)

Wow, that thing with the entity inside Lowell came out from the blue for me O_o and now due to this and my big mouth: "If that isn't the biggest plot twist around then I'm a cat." (I know this isn't a plot twist, but still... Meow~!)

So, the guy with the Blue-Eyes deck is going to be in episode 13? I thought that the "Dragons" meant Yuto... It's not like anyone can blame me for this.

See ya next time!

Yeah its the same they just ignore Dark method. And i doubt Arc V canon will bring it again anyway. Keep going and stay rockin'

update!

Ah, also, I'm won't participate in that quote thing-y but I think that Niles would be the obvious choice